The Day Deer Season Went Wrong
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Last published Sat, Jan 21, 2017
Dominic Peck was about to have a heart attack. He was on the very first hunting trip with his dad. He had waited 12 years and till October 3, the first day of hunting season to do this. Dad had brought his 30-06 and put me in charge of the binoculars. Oh, oh, oh, shhh, there it is, the 5 x 5 that dad has been glassing on for 2 years! We crept closer to get a better shot at it. Dad raised his gun, I saw him take his finger and put it in the trigger guard. Then SWOOSH...BAMMM!!!!
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