This is a nasty little romp. I originally wrote it to enter a contest with a 2000 word limit. I edited the first draft heavily and the result is a very lean and complete tale, one in very proud to say is mine. However, it is woefully devoid of character development; even as the author, I have a hard time caring much about any of them! I am submitting this as a work in progress and would appreciate any comments or criticisms you care to offer. Enjoy!All Rights Reserved