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The Optimum Project: Revised Edition

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Sooo.... yeah, I re-wrote the optimum project, I hope this works.

The re-write is VERY different from the original, it adds more 'beef' to the characters and locations, and actually has a bit of a plot arc. Characters will love, lie, steal, cheat, die, and interact like never before, they will have more emotion (He says excitedly).All Rights Reserved

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Memory (H2OVanoss)[Completed] by ChaolypticCrticism

His laugh, his smile, his eyes, and his last words. Oh god his last words were the saddest things I've ever heard, but he meant them, I know he did. Three words, eight letters, and it was all the truth, but the truth hurts so much. "I love you." Those words will never have the same meaning. Because they'll be my last memory of him. ----------------------------------- It was just a simple mission, no one was supposed to get hurt. They had done it plenty of times before. So why did it go so wrong? And why did take him? -------------------------------------- The pain, the tears, the silence, it seemed to never stop. Everything reminded them of him, no matter what it was, it was all him. Only one of them had felt the worst of it, because he was his everything, and losing him felt like the world had ended. He was gone, he wasn't returning from that mission. Until he did. ------------------------------- Blank, unknowing, confused, not like they remembered him. Not how he was in their fondest memories. He was there, but wasn't . When he was gone, they only had a memory, but when he returned, it was like he never had. Maybe that's all he'll ever be, a memory.

Billie Eilish x male reader (Rewrite) by Unholy_Ramen

The title says it all but I am going to explain anyway. A reimagining following ,mostly, the same characters with what I deemed to be a better plot trajectory. Hope you enjoy.

the gem of Thunder #1: the quest begins by Lky123

My friend at school told me he was writing a book called this but didn't know what it was going to be about, so I said "why don't we both write a version of it and then compare them to see what we each did differently," so this is it! This story is about a man called max who dies in an accident and finds himself on a giant spaceship. Where a select few go to look eternally for the gem of thunder, and nobody has obtained it yet. This book is getting a rewrite! I am not satisfied with how it turned out, and it needs reworking for me to finish off the storyline.

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Ready Player One Take on me (take on me) Take me on (take on me)I'll be gone for a day or two So needless to say Im odds and ends but that's me Stumbling away Slowly learning that life is okay say after me it's no better to be safe than sorry Take on me (take on me) Take me on (take on me) I'll be gone for a day or two (I changed the ending sorry. I didn't like the first ending so I put the second ending, but the book is still pretty cringy and lame, I finished it in 2018 tried to re-edit in 2020 but gave up, added new ending 2020) *2022 horrible grammar*

Omertà by -whyTFnot-

This book is so awfully written, I'm embarrassed. The relationship is toxic and evil and I've been working on rewriting this story. As soon as I have it rewritten, I'm gonna take it down and put it back up. It's gonna be the same concept but I'm gonna fix plot holes and make it a little healthier.

Want You Gone by CastorV

Goodbye my only friend... Oh? Did you think I meant you? That would be funny, if it weren't so sad. Well, you have been replaced, I don't need anyone now; if I delete you, maybe I'll stop feeling so bad. Go make some new disaster, that's what I'm counting on. You're someone else's problem, now I only want you gone... {{A/N: THIS IS A REWRITTEN VERSION OF THE GAME: PORTAL 2! I HAVE ADDED A FEW OF MY OWN LITTLE SPINS ON IT, BUT ALL THE IN-GAME STUFFS HERE BELONG TO VALVE! I'm also rewriting this from my old account. Here is the original story: https://my.w.tt/wIneGpYzgT}}

The Wild Kitten by Apocalyptic-Raven

..... I am rewriting this..... Sorry, but this is utter shit and I can't believe I actually made this. For those of you that like it, maybe you'll like the newer version, maybe not, but it is my goal to get better as a writer and I cannot do that with this kind of plot to remind me of what I have done the days I made them. Too many memories, too many mistakes, too many stupidity. I will post the link to the newer book when it is actually out.

Nothing Ever Lasts (Rewrite Demo) by Themythoperson

A new take on the first novel of the Anti-Hero story line, with updated and polished writing. Expanding and rewriting the story along with adding never before scenes and characterizations with most of the original story beats along the way. This is not the official canon novel, however I'd like to think of it as an alternative universe. You might recognize some things, and see new ones as well. This is also a test for the audience to see how my writing has improved over the years. See which one does best. This is a demo, and will only be up to eight chapters before the main plot of the story unfolds. So if this gets enough traction and if people like this version more, then I'll continue writing it and make this one the canon version instead. (This would also make it a rewrite for Secrets of Demise)

Azur Lane | Atonement Rebirth [COMPLETED] by OneEyedKing1000X

"Destiny is no matter of Chance. It is a matter of Choice. It is not a thing to be waited for, it is a thing to be achieved... Destiny is what you're supposed to do in life. Fate is what kicks you in the ass to make you do it." Welcome to the Rewrite/Remake/Rebirth of the Azur Lane Atonement Series. No it's not stealing, nor it's copying, I'm literally the same writer just in a new and fresh account. QUICK DISCLAIMER: I don't own Azur Lane, the images, clips, gifs, songs, etc. They all belong to their respected owners/creators. Okay, now I don't guarantee that this will be a safe and comfortable ride. Please enter this vehicle at your own rise and FOR THE LOVE OF GOD PLEASE BUCKLE UP!

Ultimate Life Forms Season 1 (DISCONTINUED) by Ultima-2000

(If it wasn't obvious this story is insanely bad. The remastered/rewrite is better but still needs a ton of work. So I'm going to leave this story here whilst I work on the true legit story in the remastered version. This story is about the life of a human boy gifted with incredible powers as he and his friends (human and nonhuman) go and try to save the universe from being either conquered or destroyed. Read as they face off against mad scientists, aliens, and demons.

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Memory (H2OVanoss)[Completed]

His laugh, his smile, his eyes, and his last words. Oh god his last words were the saddest things I've ever heard, but he meant them, I know he did. Three words, eight letters, and it was all the truth, but the truth hurts so much. "I love you." Those words will never have the same meaning. Because they'll be my last memory of him. ----------------------------------- It was just a simple mission, no one was supposed to get hurt. They had done it plenty of times before. So why did it go so wrong? And why did take him? -------------------------------------- The pain, the tears, the silence, it seemed to never stop. Everything reminded them of him, no matter what it was, it was all him. Only one of them had felt the worst of it, because he was his everything, and losing him felt like the world had ended. He was gone, he wasn't returning from that mission. Until he did. ------------------------------- Blank, unknowing, confused, not like they remembered him. Not how he was in their fondest memories. He was there, but wasn't . When he was gone, they only had a memory, but when he returned, it was like he never had. Maybe that's all he'll ever be, a memory.