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HANS; GRET
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Ongoing, First published Jan 23, 2017
This one is supposedly an entry sa isang writing contest, but due to deadline and my own damn time management, hindi ko na napasa. Eventually, naisip kong gawin siyang mas mahaba ng konti than intended.

As you can see sa title, it was based on the children's book na "Hansel and Gretel" but just with some additional twist. 

I appreciate any type of comments if you want. I am thankful enough na nagalay ka ng time to read this. 

HAPPY READING!.

- ParaCrea


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"Matapos kong basahin ang kwento, isang bata ang tumawag ng pansin ko.
 
'Ang sama naman po pala.' ani ng isang batang nakikinig sa kwento ko.
 
'Nino?' Pagtatanong ko. 
 
'Ng nanay nila.' pagtutuloy nito. 'Pinabayaan sila sa gubat para hindi siya magutom, tapos  porke hindi sila tunay na anak. Hindi po dapat ganon ang magulang, diba?'
 
Ang kwento'y pambata, ang pangala'y pamilyar sa pandinig. Tila simple ang sagot, ngunit hindi.
 
Hindi para sa kanya."

UPDATED: Feb 5, 2017
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