War Is What She Is-Rough, Rough Draft

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A woman who has only known war her entire life, ends up becoming the thing she has despised her entire life. Not by her choice what so ever. Once being an honorable soldier, to a monster to society. She forces herself into the evils of the world to still do good even if its not in the most 'good' ways. However, along her way she meets new friends, loses ones, and revisits the ones she abandon long ago. And through that all she finds herself realizing she never needed to leave who she was before to do good. 

So this is just a rough draft that I'm going to put out here for all of you to help me edit. 
This is going to be one of the things I plan to use for me getting into a writers summer camp this year.  So any advice would be great. 
Yes, I know I'm using some Overwatch themes/names/characters, however, I plan to change them completely and I also plan to separate completely from that path and edit it. Still I would like feed back on how I can change it, and names to change out. 
Also give me better tags to put this under.All Rights Reserved

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