The Commencement
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  • Reads 283
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  • Parts 11
  • Time 52m
Ongoing, First published Jan 25, 2017
At the age of eighteen each individual is tested to discover what colour their blood is. The colour that lays their fate. Each of the five colours are based on an occupation to give back to the world. Laws that are run by the officials. 
But what happens when you don't fit in any of the five groups?

---My heart beats rapidly as she pours a clear substance to my tube of blood. Waiting to see the colour of my blood patiently, I looked towards Helen who glanced at her watch on her wrist with a frantic face. A minute has gone past I presume. 
"You have to get out of here"!! She grabbed the tube and poured it down the sink, hastily pressing buttons on the computer. Nothing was making sense, "Run" she gestured towards the door.

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