Falling Apart

Falling Apart

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WpMetadataNoticeLast published Mon, Jul 31, 2017
Narrator- you name is Alice. you're 16, about to become 17. your life is pretty awesome and great, you have amazing parents that love you and a little sister that looks up to you. also your life is pretty set bacuse your plan is to become a doctor and so far your on your way to doing so with classes and clubs your high school provides for you and if you keep doing what your doing you'll have a medical scholarship to one of the top pre-medical colleges... but then you meet Him... Eli... how could one person be the cause of your downfall? he's like an earthquake that's causing all the buildings in your city to collapse. but you can't tell him good bye, you can't make him stop because... you love him... but if you don't stop him you'll just keep falling apart... a story created by: Nataiplier11
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I woke up in a hospital bed, the pain I was feeling was intense. All I remember was practicing gymnastics and then well everything went black. And now the only things I hear are the sound of my heart monitor and the slow dripping of the IV into my arm. The air in the room felt stale, the silence was so "loud" I felt like I could hear my own heart beat. I heard I light knock on the door to my room, the doctor walked in, kind of solemn looking. I got worried, I immediately asked him "Hi doctor, is there something wrong?" " With you? No, your vitals seems stable. But I thought that you should be aware of this now." "Be aware of what?" "It's about your parents." "What about them are they okay?" "No, not exactly. They were in a car accident a couple of days ago, and your father flew through the windshield and broke his leg. Your mother is in a coma and isn't waking up. They are both located at Helena Hospital." This is a story about a girl named Jessica White who is 17 yrs. old and has been a gymnast since she was four. While practicing one day she fell off a high beam and was knocked unconscious, while in the hospital she is informed her parents were in terrible car accident and her mother is now in a coma. Throughout the story Jessica's family breaks, her friendships grow, her trust deteriorates, lost loves return, many tears are shed and hearts are broken but despite the pain her life goes on. With the Help of her best friend Ashley Bennett, her strong will and unwavering fight, Jessica learns to believe In the impossible and to not let go of the things in life that mean the most to you.

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