Daylight - Second Draft
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The world of Aedryn has entered an era of unprecidented peace and prosperity. War is a thing of the past, old feuds reduced to mere legends. But there are signs of change on the horizon, signs that war might be returning... and in the proud nation of Mayagarde, Eleanor Mayne - a young woman with a unique ability - sets out on a journey to uncover the mysteries of her past, leading her to the heart of a conspiracy that threatens to destroy not only the Mayagarde Empire, but the whole of Aedryn...
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