Not Good Enough

Right now I don't really see the reason for trying, or talking, or breathing. I'm just done.

Kelly Montgomery was a girl who lived with her mother and twin sister in a small town. Kelly is a victim of bullying, physical and mental abuse.
Not from the girls at her high school. Not from the boys around the town. No, it was from her own mother.
Her birth mother despised Kelly but loved Anna, Kelly's twin. This hatred grows bigger and bigger as the days go on. Read how the lady who gave birth to Kelly also stole Kelly's right to live.

A/N: I created this story as a short story during my freshman year in high school for an English finals project. It had to be 8 pages, and no longer. That means no room for extra detail. Noted the teacher gave me a C *rolls eyes*. I've had many people proof read this and they loved it so what was going on in her mind when she read this i have no clue. The story is really good, I would love to make it longer but there's no point if you guys don't like it. So do me the biggest favor in the world, read it and comment. Let me know if i should re-write the story so there's more pages which means more explanation and more details. If i were to do so i would keep the same plot and everything i'd just be making it longer. Thank you for your time and i hope you enjoy it, tell your friends.
Xoxo, Ashley.