The Mystery of a Store and a Missing Girl

This is actually a story I wrote when I was little so it will have a lot of mistakes. Don't worry about it. I didn't want to edit it because I wrote it in 2008. I want to keep some of those memories alive. So here you are and enjoy. I was 10 years old when I wrote it. Just so you know. The only thing I changed was my name. And it's not that bloody.

And I made a revised one that's coming up when I have the time.