Fractured Vows

Hey guys and gals, this is just a short story I wrote in ninth grade and thought it might be decent enough to share publicly for the first time. This is my first time sharing anything I've written on here, or any other website. I love to write, I've just never had the courage to share it with the public.

I have some ideas knocking about in my head that I may try to shape into stories of various types and themes, let me know if you enjoyed the story, and if you think I should keep sharing my tales.