What went wrong...
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Last published Mon, Mar 13, 2017
It all happened at the back to school party. Almost everyone in the school was inside the gym dancing and playing games, everyone had an amazing night. Well, almost everyone. It wasn't until a month into school when the body of Darren Miller was found in
Follow the murderers as they try and get away with the crime. Try and understand what happened that night and find out... where it all went wrong.
(feel free to comment your theories as the story progresses)
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