Separate Isles

Arndrig was a meek lad, a misfit lost in a world he could not understand, summoned to sub-orbiting isles, he is almost immediately captured and subjugated. from then on it becomes a struggle to escape, amid the conflicts of his metal clad captors he finds salvation, and unknowingly sparks the journey to unravel the meaning of existence.

This takes place long before man was contrived, a few decades after the beginning of time.

(Any input will be appreciated, even if it's slander)
it's still an evolving story, the setting is quite like ultimate freedom, there are few towns and cityscapes, but numerous wonders unique to the world. Although this is High Fantasy, I use a lot of scientific logic to create the far fetched notions, I've split three chapters to about twenty, to try and get more views, if you think this is a bad idea I can always extend the word maximum from 1k to something higher.