THE UNKNOWN

THE UNKNOWN

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I began to get really weak and tired, it's been two weeks four days since the unknown kidnapped me, I was beginning to see a tormented and disturbed person in front of me who really needed help "So do you know what I did next?, I cut her open and ripped her heart out, just before she lost a lot of blood, she was still alive and I ripped her heart out, I held it in my hand" I couldn't take this anymore, I couldn't stand or even imagin what he did to her, I felt really angry. "You monster" I spat out angrily, he quickly turned he's head to face me, that was when I looked into his eyes and saw he was both angry and hurt at the same time. "No your wrong, because she is the true monster" his hands begun to shake, his voice begun to crack, he was vulnerable, he was weak and felt pain, this girl caused him so much pain. "She used me, I loved her, something I have never felt for anyone, so that is why I ripped her heart out, so she could fell what I felt" then something happened, something I thought would never happen in a thousand years, tears began to fall down his eyes, he begun to cry, the unknown was crying. "But when I ripped it out, there was blood everywhere, but I was still filled with rage, anger, so I took out her kindeys, then her lungs, then her liver, I didnt stop till I pulled out everything, till she had no organs left". I hope you guys would really like this book.
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In a dystopian world, where the strongest prevails, having peace is a luxury. Especially when someone from the past is out to destroy everything we have built up over the past 15 years. And with Christmas approaching, our group get to face ten hellish days. Preview: In his fury, the chains have rubbed his wrists and neck raw, despite me trying to calm him down. He suddenly calms down when the screams in the cell next to us switch to the sound of bones breaking. Now he sits with foam on his lips and his eyes wide, looking that way. After ten minutes, the sounds of the boys in our cell have died down, and we all look at the wall that separates us from the crackling of the breaking bones. And then suddenly all is quiet. After a few silent minutes, our cell door opens slowly. From the ball of light from the ceiling, the little girl in the doorway is illuminated. She is completely covered in blood and doesn't move. Then she opens her eyes and carefully walks towards us. And despite everything, my first impulse is to crawl backwards, away from the unnatural calm radiating from her. ------------- After reading yet another great older brothers/younger sister story, where the family gets reunited after years of separation, the sister keeps the secret that she was abused and assaulted all along, and the brothers conceal their work in the mafia, I decided to give it also a try. The output of my story was initially to turn this around with openness and unconditional support and the torture should happen right in front of their very eyes. Because no story is complete without the (un)necessary bloodshed, action, humour and, of course, a bad guy. And who knows, to throw everything completely upside down, the main character may not survive. I won't write warnings above each chapter, because most of them contain violence, blood, torture, etc. Constructive criticism is welcome. Ow, and English is not my first, second or third language. So if I mess up somewhere, let me know!

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