A Valentine Surprise
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When the police turn up in the night to question Mr Wells about his ex girlfriend, the true horror of what really happened to her is about to unfold...
This is a short story entry for a Valentine themed writing contest; my first horror piece I've written for a very long time so any comments or improvements are much appreciated!
Approx. 1500 words.
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