My Immortal Love ||Rewritten||

My Immortal Love ||Rewritten||

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This is a rewrite of a story I started a few years ago, which is still up and you can find it o my profile. Some character names were changed (Drea is now Giselle and Darius is now Demyan) and the story follows the same sort of plot but it's MUCH better written now. The rewrite is not finished either, but I'm much more satisfied with it than the original draft. When you think of Dracula, you think of a vampire with a cape and Transylvanian accent and three brides. Everyone knows that story. But what do you think of if you hear Dimitri, the son of Dracula? Dimitri is a vampire. He has fangs, he drinks blood, and three brides. Well, actually, he only had two until Alivia. She never imagined that she would wake up in his castle with only him and his other two brides for company. She hates her new life almost as much as she hates Dimitri, and she spends all her time making sure he knows it. But when she finds out about an ancient prophecy where only one bride can come out alive, her relationship with Dimitri becomes a matter of life or death. (Gonna rewrite this synopsis soon)
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I wanted to do a bit of a rewrite again I'm sorry I'm hardly ever happy with the results and it has to be completely perfect so please bare with me . it takes alot for me to be happy with what I write . any spellings or mistakes in my writing please tell me if you see any. thanks for actually reading this X . here's the actual discription. I could have had a normal life but after getting myself in trouble that chance was completely lost I couldn't change what happened I wish I could but I blew it. the consequences are well I can never leave my room or even see the sun for the fear that she's there telling me what I've done wrong. over and over making me know there's no chance I can change my ways. however how wrong she was. I could have made it better but I didn't I only made it worse for myself

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