The Perfect Mistake
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Last published Mon, Jul 31, 2017
All I could hear was the sound of my own fading heartbeat.
I can hear my own slowing breathing.
I slowly opened my eyes again, feeling a wetness seep into my clothing. It was cold, dark; a place I didn't belong. I tried to move, to open the car door, but I couldn't. I reached for the doors again, but my legs wouldn't move.
Panic sinks in, and I fear I'll be stuck here forever.
I'm dying, this is what dying feels like.
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