Atempt and Rewrite
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Last published Fri, Feb 10, 2017
Rewiting a story is hard, it's like giving up on the thing that you wanted to create for so long.
now this is just practice and a showcase of what i write. Well i can write romance, i was feling up to horror though since i expended my nicer attidude earlier. (not that much Horror though but i'll have to enter it for the reason of being carefull)
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