The Poor Unlucky Girl
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Good day to you. My name is Dr. Raymond Burr, the main doctor of client 79 or as doctors and nurses referred to her as, Elizabeth Macintosh. She has been here for 8 years and she had to be the favorite of the doctors in my clinic that I run. Its name is Raymond Asylum, not a creative name as I've been told.
She committed suicide some time ago. Although we do not know why she did it. All we have left to go on is her diary. The doctors in the asylum cannot figure out why she did what she did, so now you have the chance to figure it out for yourself.
I will warn you that there and could be things that you do not understand and you may not know the whole story, thus we do not know why. We believe it was the act of client 509. She has told us she has heard a voice in her head, we have all experienced it in my department but we've never had it to where someone was driven off the edge. I take her death as my fault, I should not have left her unprotected to such foul things.
This book contains the following: partially graphic scenes, odd views on life (thats only for people who can't accept other peoples views and opinions on life), and lots of notes to help you understand it a little better then you could if they were not there.
Will find my first report on her on the first page. thank you for your time. If you have any information that you could give to us as a help to finding out, so should I say why she died, please call the following number.
(555)-849-5414
Note:
There are no grammatical errors in the story that are not there on purpose, Elizabeth states she is not good with words.
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