Breaking the Chains

Breaking the Chains

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~COMPLETED~ Riley once had a best friend who she could trust, but that hadn't been the case for years. At 13-14 years old, Riley was held hostage in a basement before she was taken to a metal shack in the middle of nowhere. Enter Alison, Riley's old best friend. Alison has a weird mental illness that stops her from being herself and sometimes she loses herself. But that doesn't make Alison innocent. After years of being alone in a rotten metal cell by herself, Riley is forced to share her cell with a boy named Eli. Will they get out alive before Alison notices? Highest ranking: 92 in Mystery//Thriller ~~EDITING~~ **QUICK NOTE** DO NOT STEAL ANY OF THESE CHARACTERS OR THE STORY IN GENERAL. I (and my friend) OWN AND CREATED THEM. PLEASE BE A NICE PERSON AND RESPECT THAT. THANK YOU. Beginning line of the story was from a prompt from Pinterest! **IMPORTANT** This story was written by my friend and I a while back (her writing focuses more on Eli than Riley in the chapters!) Chapter Nine and on are mostly my writing so I hope you enjoy!
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"Are you old enough to be here?" The 18-year-old asked, and Hailey laughed. "Yeah. Of course, look can we just have two light beers?" Hailey asked looking at the desserts. "Well, I'm supposed to id, but I don't get paid enough for this." He rolls his eyes sliding the beers over. "Enjoy!" He groans cleaning off the counter and assisting the next customer. We walk over to a small booth and sit down. Hailey slides the beers over to me and I open one. I start to lift it and then set it back on the table. "Um... Hailey are we old enough for this?" she nods so I take a sip. It was disgusting but I felt like I should drink more so I drank the rest. Hailey had already gone to order more, and I stumbled towards her. A man grabbed me dragging me towards the back door and Hailey ran over trying to grab me. She screamed trying to get people to help but they were all distracted. The man stuck something in my arm and threw me in a van. He shut the door and Hailey ran inside to call the police. Someone covered my head with a bag, and I felt a sharp pain in my neck and then I blacked out. After that day, my life was changed forever... Click to find out more.

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