Breaking the Chains
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  • Parts 47
  • Time 5h 22m
Complete, First published Feb 11, 2017
~COMPLETED~

Riley once had a best friend who she could trust, but that hadn't been the case for years. At 13-14 years old, Riley was held hostage in a basement before she was taken to a metal shack in the middle of nowhere. 
Enter Alison, Riley's old best friend. Alison has a weird mental illness that stops her from being herself and sometimes she loses herself. But that doesn't make Alison innocent. 
After years of being alone in a rotten metal cell by herself, Riley is forced to share her cell with a boy named Eli. 
Will they get out alive before Alison notices? 

Highest ranking: 92 in Mystery//Thriller

~~EDITING~~

**QUICK NOTE** DO NOT STEAL ANY OF THESE CHARACTERS OR THE STORY IN GENERAL. I (and my friend) OWN AND CREATED THEM. 
PLEASE BE A NICE PERSON AND RESPECT THAT. 
THANK YOU. 


Beginning line of the story was from a prompt from Pinterest! 

**IMPORTANT** This story was written by my friend and I a while back (her writing focuses more on Eli than Riley in the chapters!) Chapter Nine and on are mostly my writing so I hope you enjoy!
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