The Pain of the Past

The ghost crew has taken a new member under their wing Ezra Bridger, a street smart kid from lothal. But little do they know how much he has gone through and how long it will take to break down the barriers.

First story criticism is needed and I'm open to ideas :) thanks y'all!

I DO NOT OWN STAR WARS REBELS I CREATED THIS PLOT AND ONLY ONE CHARACTER AND THATS KIRA