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Among the Angels

Among the Angels

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WpMetadataNoticeLast published Mon, Feb 17, 2014
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Helena de Felde is in a bit of a pinch. Her friend Arthur, has gone chasing a girl who claims to have magic to the capital, Alimera. Unfortunately for Helena, when he sends a letter back to their village asking for help, she doesn't know what to do. Helena is crippled. Her heart bothers her and she often has hard times walking long distances. She depends on a walking stick to get around. She also has dreams. She dreams of another world. A world where she lays motionless and watches the world around her. A world that is so strange and unfamiliar, but she knows she has seen it before. Perhaps the most curious item is a book. It sits on the table in her dreams, yet Helena knows she's seen back in her world. Nevertheless, she knows that she can't abandon a friend. So she takes up the challenge and along with a little help from a dashing outlaw, Helena is sent on a wild journey to try to rescue Arthur and make everything right again. But she also races against the clock -- for her time on Earth is running out. And just how soon until it does?
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