Critical Condition (Les Twins FanFic)
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Leosha is a single thirty something jewelry designer who is fed up with the way she's been treated by men. Never had a man that genuinely loved her, nor had a relationship that lasted over 8 months. Giving up on love, she started distancing herself from anyone who got too close. Trying to fill that empty space in her heart, Leosha jumped head first into her business and started traveling to keep her mind occupied. Through her travels, she bumps into a Frenchman named Laurent Bourgeois. One half of the most famous, hip hop freestyle dancing duo / models Les Twins. After spending a few nights together with friendly conversation, things started to heat up with the two. Introducing her to things that she never experienced from a man, feelings quickly surfaced. Afraid of another heartbreak, assumptions took over Leosha, causing her to flee. But she wasn't quite ready for life's little interception. With issues of past lovers, trust, and loyalty, chaos circled theses two putting both of their hearts in Critical Condition.
(Meaning for Critical Condition) - "Uncertain prognosis, vital signs are unstable or abnormal, there are major complications, and death may be imminent."
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