The Luna's Choice (On Hold)
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Lucy was the pack slave, having her parents die when she was young, she was removed from the pack, but kept as a slave, used as a toy. it was her 17th birthday and it was the day that she would mature, but because she was so weak not even her wolf talked to her anymore. Rejected by her mate she had finally had enough, she manages to escape, but will she ever find peace? or happiness? or has the life been drained out of her a long time ago?
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