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A story about a girl named Eleonora Valenstein from Nealux Kingdom. She fled with her father's friend to Qin. She hid her true identity, but will it stay hidden for long? Disclaimer: I don't own any character from the anime "Kingdom"

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When the love of his life puts a stop to 'forever', Joe moves to the English countryside for a start fresher than manure heavy country air. However, it's a lot bumpier thank first expected, with a house in need of some TLC and a mental state in need of complete repair. Joe hires Cal, the village's only handyman, who rebuilds more than just his home. New chapters uploaded every Sunday. First draft, unedited.

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But, I need them for my fanfic on AO3 because I no longer use Wattpad that often. So if any of you have an AO3 account + a discord account and you are interested in being a beta reader for me great! Check out the first chapter for the description of the fic and if you are still interested. Fandom: Dream SMP Shipping: None Main Relationships: Ranboo, Tommy, & Tubbo are platonic husbands, Michael is their son. || Technoblade and Wilbur are apart of Philza's flock Other: Super power AU. || Hero, Villian, and Vigilante AU. || Mostly fluff and then some angst.

In the dystopian society of Polis, an evil scientist named Dr. Ojeda aspires to become president. Loved by the citizens but despised by animals, Dr. Ojeda's true intentions are sinister. Hyticon, a robotic dog, teams up with a Shiba Inu puppy named Yuri in a daring attempt to escape from Dr. Ojeda's clutches. Along their journey, they encounter two different groups who unite to prevent Dr. Ojeda's plans. Together, they travel multiple districts, striving to reveal the truth to the country. Dr. Ojeda has been brainwashing them into believing that animals are sickly and evil ----- Looking for readers willing to give feedback

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Her mother was murdered four years ago, causing Luna to drop out of school or risk losing her mother's coffee shop. Barely able to keep her business afloat, Luna and her friend Harlow find themselves mixed in a series of murders targeting their kind. If being a Witch in the city wasn't complicated enough already, it was about to get a lot worse. Please excuse the horrible summary, it has never been my strong suit. All feedback is welcome! Part of the current 2019 Watty Awards Participants! Be Kind | Be Respectful

Henry James (you can call me Hank), has "special" dreams. His dreams are about the future; dreams are about people he's never met; people who have one thing in common: they're going to be murdered. One more note about Hank's future dreams -- the future does not want to be changed.

Every mythical world Bastet has read about is paradise compared to the hell they live in. Maylea is not that place. With some possessing unordinary abilities, two friends as different as the sun and sea, and a pretty assassin out for their head, Bastet has to learn the consequences of running away. Briar has always kept her mind at a distance. Maybe if things are put afar then she won't feel the sting. She's always been searching for an out, a way to escape her life and create a new one. That escape just might be the person she accidentally fell in love with. It might be the person she was ordered to kill. Nyx's theory is do harm be harmed. But nobody can touch you if you're up in the sky. Unfortunately , nobody ever tells you the burn out of a god. And all these visions of the world aren't helping xer's case. So, what happens when a Runaway, Assassin and God meet? ----- this is for my two beta readers. If you find this and want to read it go ahead! But there is a very long TW list and TW will be at the beginnings of chapters!!

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[Hidden But Always Close is a large scale narrative that will one day be a graphic novel series but for now it's still in it's pre-pre-pre production phase. Until then I'm still trying to hammer out any plot threads or story beats. So be prepared for some questionable motives, grammar errors, and mysterious twists and paranormal turns. ] Vol1.1_A Victorian doctor by the name of Andrew has just been appointed a patient by the name of Henry. Yet even he's working in a madhouse there seems to be something off about Henry besides his recent memory lose.