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Captured tells the compelling story of 32-year-old Evanesce Greadwich, a young woman navigating a society obsessed with perfection. In this world, every citizen is assigned a purpose, each action is closely monitored, and all thoughts must conform to the ideals of the ruling Authority. While crime, poverty, and conflict may be absent, they come at an insurmountable cost: freedom. As the rules tighten and authoritarian control escalates, Evanesce makes a bold choice to defy manipulation. With memories erased and realities distorted, who will rise as the true hero? Captured is a gripping young adult dystopian novel that delves into themes of control, identity, truth, and the fight for freedom. Journey with Evanesce as she challenges a fabricated notion of perfection, prompting us to consider a profound question: if freedom requires sacrifice, how much are we willing to surrender to not be controlled? As memories get taken and realities changed, who will be the hero?

Cover by evioran on youtube! Credits to my good friend Percy for beta reading and editing!!! Major TWs: Death, dissociating, derealization, depersonalization, mentions of sex and religion

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Looking for new beta readers. Looking for Beta Readers Publish Date is 30 Days from now Word count approx. 95000 Genre- Fantasy Romance- steamy (Part 1 of a saga) archeebelle@gmail.com www.facebook.com/ArcheeBelle Brief Description: My world is nothing like it was a few months ago. Demons roam the earth, slaughtering all in their path. They are aligned with men in robes, a cult. As life as I knew it came to an end, an entire race was found. Witches and powerful beings came out of the dark. Not to save us, but to take our world for their own. I've killed, and I've suffered. But after a childhood of captivity and pain, I've found my family. Now I must save them. Save them from the underground world we've been imprisoned in, save them from the race of magical men and horrific monsters that want everything for their own. I would do anything to save them, but a dangerous man and his band of powerful Warriors stands in our way. He causes feelings I don't understand, or want to rise inside me. Feelings I'm not ready to admit to. This is my story of captivity. My story of struggle, and failures. My story of family and friendship. My story of love.

Sometimes, the truth is better left untold. When Judi altered this law and went on to seek a dark hidden secret. What she found instead was her life in a turmoil of danger and now she must be brave and stand against those who will go to any length to have her mouth shut... even kill her. Will she be able to defeat all odds and expose such a daunting secret or will she be alive long enough to tell the tale? An eye opener to suspense crafted by a contemporary Nigerian writer.

On her eighteenth birthday, Kavita was supposed to awaken as a mage. Instead she was left powerless- an outsider in a world ruled by magic. Seven years later, she made peace with her fate, studying how magic shapes society while watching her younger brother step into the life she never had. But when his rare, long forgotten power is revealed, the celebration turns to chaos. An attack leaves the academy in ruins, the elder mages kidnapped-and Kavita dead. Only death is where her magic begins. Revived with a forbidden gift- the power to command and destroy the dead, kavita must embrace the darkness she never meant to wield. To save her brother, she'll have to become the very thing the gods condemned. Can a cursed power still be used for good, or will it claim her soul before she can save his?

Hybrids have existed since the beginning, along with humans, that was until a war broke out...... I'd really like it if anyone who reads this and is a part of any minority would read 😊

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Henry James (you can call me Hank), has "special" dreams. His dreams are about the future; dreams are about people he's never met; people who have one thing in common: they're going to be murdered. One more note about Hank's future dreams -- the future does not want to be changed.

Humans relocated themselves and cross-evolved on a new planet, Orth. A social hierarchy has emerged based on physical features. The highest class and the lowest are forbidden to have children with each other for crucial reasons based on the fate of the world. But one has been raised in secret and set loose, causing chaos.

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