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In the realm of Aegia, everyone has one chance to rise. Upon reaching adolescence, citizens of Aegia can choose to enroll in one of the Academies, where they can be taught the ancient texts, history of the realm, and the runes that priests use to commune with the gods. At the end of their time at the Academy, they face a series of tests to be sorted into two social classes: 𝗔𝗲𝗹𝗮𝗿𝗶𝘀, the elite rulers, advance to the top positions in their field, deciding what is built, what is destroyed, where taxes go...and who lives and dies. And 𝘀𝘆𝗹𝗿𝗮, the servants bound by magic to their Aelaris. Seen as little more than an appendage and status symbol, they spend their days following their Aelaris and living for their demands, completely devoted and content in their role. The bond is considered sacred. It prevents the Aelaris from ever harming their sylra while ensuring the sylra is happy to serve. The Rite of Ascension determines who belongs where, a process that measures worth and potential, through the power of the gods. Rian Argon-son has always believed he was destined to join the ranks of the Aelaris, working tirelessly to prove himself worthy. Meanwhile his nemesis Ileana, born into wealth and privilege, has always seen herself as a true heir to power. Their rivalry has simmered in all their time at the Academy, and now the final testing is upon them. They may be both top of the class, but ultimately the Rite of Ascension will decide everything. Both have prepared, but neither is truly ready for what is to come. And everything is not quite as it seems.

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Looking for Beta readers. This is my first book. A fantasy novel loosely based on the basic story of reincarnation animes/mangas. The main genre is fantasy, and the sub-themes are romance and lgbtq. if you could answer these questions after/while reading, it would be a big help. - Mark anywhere you skim. - Did you get confused on who a character was? - Did you lose track of who was speaking? - Mark each part where you stopped reading. - Did you notice any story inconsistencies?

But, I need them for my fanfic on AO3 because I no longer use Wattpad that often. So if any of you have an AO3 account + a discord account and you are interested in being a beta reader for me great! Check out the first chapter for the description of the fic and if you are still interested. Fandom: Dream SMP Shipping: None Main Relationships: Ranboo, Tommy, & Tubbo are platonic husbands, Michael is their son. || Technoblade and Wilbur are apart of Philza's flock Other: Super power AU. || Hero, Villian, and Vigilante AU. || Mostly fluff and then some angst.

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On her eighteenth birthday, Kavita was supposed to awaken as a mage. Instead she was left powerless- an outsider in a world ruled by magic. Seven years later, she made peace with her fate, studying how magic shapes society while watching her younger brother step into the life she never had. But when his rare, long forgotten power is revealed, the celebration turns to chaos. An attack leaves the academy in ruins, the elder mages kidnapped-and Kavita dead. Only death is where her magic begins. Revived with a forbidden gift- the power to command and destroy the dead, kavita must embrace the darkness she never meant to wield. To save her brother, she'll have to become the very thing the gods condemned. Can a cursed power still be used for good, or will it claim her soul before she can save his?

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When a patient's sudden death shatters, Dr. Nova Natalie's world, she's thrust into a treacherous game of truth and deception. Joining forces with FBI Agent Asher , they unravel the tangled threads surrounding the mysterious demise. But as they dig deeper, dark secrets emerge, and the lines between truth and lies blur. Torn between her duty to uncover the truth and her growing feelings for a familiar yet troubled face from her past, Dr. Nova Natalie must navigate the treacherous landscape of her own heart. Will she find justice for her patient, or will the secrets of the past destroy everything she holds, dear? Dive into this gripping tale of mystery, romance, and suspense, where the truth is hidden, and the stakes are deadly .

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