Criticism Stories

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I've spent a lot of time thinking about what it truly means to call the Philippines 'HOME.' It's a place of incredible warmth and breathtaking beauty, but it also has its shadows and its struggles. I decided to put those feelings into words. My new poetry collection on Wattpad, Chosen Land, Beloved Beat , is my honest tribute to our country-capturing both the gold and the grit of our islands. I'd love for you to take a look and let me know which piece resonates with you the most. Follow me on Wattpad if you want, I am John Mark N. Luciano (@DonJuanMarco), if you saw the name of Moriones Zazadevha, that was my former Wattpad account. I would be publish One Poem, on Friday, Saturday and Sunday. 12:00 am(Philippine Time) (All criticism will be accepted as long as it does not contain any foul language or insults. Let us keep our Good Manners and Right Conduct. To God be the Glory.)

The characters belong to Masashi Kishimoto. This story is entirely my own work. If you've already read the first version of Scars of Royalty, you'll know what the story is about. But since I wasn't satisfied with the first version of this fanfic, I've decided to improve both the writing and the plot. Yes, there will be slight changes, but it's to improve the quality of the fanfic so you can enjoy it more. I apologize to all my readers who followed the first version of Scars of Royalty, and I thank you for reading it. I will do a better job. Thank you all very much.

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Looking for a safe space to get constructive feedback? A place where you're not just called out, but also given ways to improve? A place to grow and expand into the vast space of your creativity? Then you've found the right place. Here, I strive to give you the best review I possibly can-highlighting strong points, areas for improvement, and offering usable suggestions. I don't sugarcoat, so this isn't the place for you if you're looking for an ego boost. That said, I do my best to offer reviews with a calm, professional tone-a means to raise your confidence and morale. So-what are you waiting for?

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Here you can find/receive: • Book Advertising (Features) • Book Ratings (/10) • Reads/Readers • Reviews • Recommendations • Improvements • Edits • Grammar Sweeps • Comment Suggestions/Corrections Honesty's the best policy and I'm too honest for my own good...and a bit hypocritical maybe, bite me! Welcome to book advertising, A.K.A - Beautiful Books and Reviews! You can find things to work on in your writing or you can find your next amazing book to read...win win! A/Note - READ THE INTRODUCTIONS AND COMMENT PAGE BEFORE COMMENTING ❤️ Happy reading and writing beautiful 💕📚

He didn't just choose her. He recognized her, not for what she pretended to be, but for what she already was. This story wasn't about beauty as the world defines it. It was about what remains when the noise fades. Dignity, sincerity, grace that doesn't seek attention, but commands respect.

The Ultimate GameCube Tier List! None had tried to rank at least a great portion of the wonderous system's library, so I thought to do it! As of now the list will be at about 135 video games from instant classics to the worst of shovelware! Some will be focused on quite a bunch while others will be breezed through, as this list will consist of games I've both completed and have not finished as of yet, but when I have something to say, boy will I have something to say! These ranking are all my opinion, and there is bound to be hot takes, so no flames! Also, expect spoilers...

A compilation of my works, dated from 2018-2022. These pieces are not placed in order.

What if the most dangerous idea of the 21st century is not artificial intelligence, but the enterprise that tells you, "you are an algorithm"? Anti‑Harari begins by dismantling one of the most dazzling narratives of the tech age: the "inevitability" of Dataism. This narrative, circulated under the guise of popular science, is in fact a new theology of power. Just as medieval feudal power was legitimised through divine order, so too is today's algorithmic order legitimised through scholastic dogmas. The reason is the same: to make power permanent. That is why discourse must be as sharp as a sword - and why "new stories" are always needed. This book targets three fundamental dogmas: the reduction of the human to an algorithm, the denial of the will, and the absolutisation of data. It also lays bare the political economy behind them. The author does not leave the discussion in abstract philosophy. He descends to the body - the primary source of the paradigm he calls Somatic Materialism. He maps a somatic terrain stretching from the nervous system to the gut, from microorganisms to connective tissue. This map reveals: the human being is not a closed computational system; we are an open, vibrating, unpredictable ecosystem. For this reason, the issue is not merely intellectual. It is a matter of a new property regime being imposed under the name of "inevitability." It is a matter of sovereignty and production relations taking on a new form through algorithmic instruments. It is a matter of the body becoming a new colonial territory. Anti‑Harari is not against technology. But it is against technology being presented as a destiny independent of power relations. Because behind what is presented as destiny, there is always a design. A spectre is haunting the algorithm. The spectre is the body.

Un petit livre, pour partager mes rages et colères... La cover à été faite par moi, tout droits réservé

This is a short story I wrote a couple years ago when I first got into writing. Reading it over I see many flaws, but I would also like constructive criticism. Do please leave your comments, just don't be mean about it and please be honest. ~Yours truly, Sekkusudemon P. S. Any pictures I use aren't mine so credit to the photographer/artist

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Is Christianity still intellectually defensible in an age of scepticism? This book tackles the most common arguments against the Christian faith, engaging with challenges from textual criticism, history, philosophy, and morality. It examines the reliability of the Bible, addressing claims of textual corruption and historical inaccuracy. It explores the philosophical foundations of belief, responding to atheistic and agnostic objections. It also confronts moral arguments against Christianity, such as the problem of evil and accusations of religious harm. With careful analysis and reasoned argument, "A Christian Responds" presents a case for Christianity as not only historically credible but also philosophically and morally compelling. This book is an invitation to examine the evidence and consider the truth of the Christian message. ** Uploads every Friday.

--> 𝘎𝘰𝘯 𝘸𝘢𝘵𝘤𝘩𝘦𝘥 𝘵𝘩𝘦 𝘣𝘭𝘰𝘯𝘥 𝘸𝘰𝘮𝘢𝘯 𝘢𝘴 𝘴𝘩𝘦 𝘵𝘳𝘪𝘦𝘥 𝘵𝘰 𝘴𝘵𝘢𝘯𝘥 𝘶𝘱, 𝘶𝘴𝘪𝘯𝘨 𝘩𝘦𝘳 𝘢𝘳𝘮𝘴, 𝘢𝘯𝘥 𝘸𝘳𝘪𝘯𝘬𝘭𝘦𝘥 𝘩𝘦𝘳 𝘧𝘢𝘤𝘦 𝘪𝘯 𝘱𝘢𝘪𝘯. 𝘏𝘦𝘳 𝘭𝘪𝘱𝘴 𝘱𝘢𝘳𝘵𝘦𝘥 𝘢𝘯𝘥 𝘵𝘩𝘦𝘺 𝘴𝘵𝘢𝘳𝘵𝘦𝘥 𝘵𝘰 𝘮𝘰𝘷𝘦 𝘸𝘪𝘵𝘩 𝘴𝘭𝘪𝘨𝘩𝘵 𝘮𝘰𝘷𝘦𝘮𝘦𝘯𝘵𝘴, "𝘗𝘦𝘰𝘱𝘭𝘦 𝘥𝘪𝘦, 𝘎𝘰𝘯. 𝘚𝘰𝘮𝘦𝘵𝘪𝘮𝘦𝘴 𝘢𝘵 𝘵𝘩𝘦 𝘳𝘪𝘨𝘩𝘵 𝘵𝘪𝘮𝘦 𝘢𝘯𝘥 𝘴𝘰𝘮𝘦𝘵𝘪𝘮𝘦𝘴 𝘰𝘶𝘵 𝘰𝘧 𝘰𝘳𝘥𝘪𝘯𝘢𝘳𝘺. 𝘉𝘶𝘵 𝘸𝘩𝘢𝘵 𝘮𝘢𝘵𝘵𝘦𝘳𝘴 𝘪𝘴 𝘸𝘩𝘢𝘵 𝘵𝘩𝘦𝘺'𝘷𝘦 𝘢𝘤𝘩𝘪𝘦𝘷𝘦𝘥 𝘢𝘯𝘥 𝘩𝘰𝘸 𝘵𝘩𝘦𝘺'𝘷𝘦 𝘩𝘦𝘭𝘱𝘦𝘥 𝘵𝘩𝘦𝘪𝘳 𝘱𝘦𝘰𝘱𝘭𝘦."<-- "Cowards die many times before their deaths; The valiant never taste of death but once." -Julius Caesar, Act II, Scene II --> 𝘛𝘩𝘦 𝘸𝘩𝘪𝘵𝘦 𝘩𝘢𝘪𝘳𝘦𝘥 𝘮𝘢𝘭𝘦 𝘵𝘰𝘰𝘬 𝘰𝘯𝘦 𝘮𝘰𝘳𝘦 𝘴𝘪𝘱 𝘧𝘳𝘰𝘮 𝘵𝘩𝘦 𝘥𝘪𝘳𝘵𝘺 𝘸𝘢𝘵𝘦𝘳, 𝘪𝘵 𝘸𝘢𝘴 𝘢𝘭𝘭 𝘵𝘩𝘦𝘺 𝘩𝘢𝘥 𝘭𝘦𝘧𝘵. 𝘏𝘦 𝘨𝘭𝘢𝘯𝘤𝘦𝘥 𝘢𝘵 𝘵𝘩𝘦 𝘣𝘭𝘰𝘯𝘥 𝘸𝘰𝘮𝘦𝘯, 𝘭𝘢𝘺𝘪𝘯𝘨 𝘰𝘯 𝘵𝘩𝘦 𝘣𝘦𝘥. 𝘎𝘰𝘯 𝘸𝘢𝘵𝘤𝘩𝘦𝘥 𝘩𝘪𝘮 𝘴𝘤𝘰𝘧𝘧 𝘢𝘯𝘥 𝘱𝘶𝘵 𝘵𝘩𝘦 𝘸𝘢𝘵𝘦𝘳 𝘢𝘸𝘢𝘺. 𝘏𝘦 𝘵𝘢𝘭𝘬𝘦𝘥 𝘪𝘯 𝘢 𝘳𝘢𝘴𝘱𝘺 𝘷𝘰𝘪𝘤𝘦, "𝘠𝘰𝘶 𝘬𝘯𝘰𝘸 𝘯𝘰𝘵𝘩𝘪𝘯𝘨, old hag." &lt

It's really just French practice. Concrit welcome from actual speakers 💅

A little boy gets lost on a train in Stuttgart. Frightened, he hides in a bathroom while his mother searches desperately... not knowing that help will come from the most unexpected person. ✅