Eloquence Stories

eloquence ˈɛləkwəns/ noun - the art of using language in an apt, fluent way • lyrics in their true form - words.

ㅡ She chose to be drowned by her thoughts than to be saved for nothingness. ㅡ compilation of proses ㅡ all entries are mine Background photo credits to @expastel

An eloquent mind

Constructive poetry: a new genre of poetry that uses insubstantial nuggets of writing as the seeds to grow more robust and lush wordscapes, and a collaborative opportunity in which the Wattpad community can lend a hand in propagating this garden of beauty. Did you ever read an inspirational quote and think, "That's not all that deep, let alone inspirational," or a platitude and find, "This doesn't speak to me," or a poem that made you wonder, "That's an interesting idea, but could it be fleshed out more?" If so, and you would like to see the potential of such incomplete or underdeveloped pieces of writing realized, these constructive poems might satisfy that curiosity. These poems strive to take trite, unpolished, disappointing, and just outright bad writing, and through some added effort, nuance, and a little verbosity, transform them into something greater. The poems that will make up this collection are all inspired by cliched expressions, uninspired instapoetry, failed aphorisms and other instances of terse writing in need of a makeover. You may think of this "Constructive Poetry" as the antithesis of so-called "blackout poetry," insofar as, rather than erasing what is ugly to make something more beautiful, the goal is to improve impoverished writing through upbuilding, through fine-tuning and embellishing, through constructive criticism baked into a failure's own remix. The fuel for these poems comes in the form of crude writing, of which I am not aware of all instances. Submit a particular piece of writing you find particularly lacking (source cited, please) and I will with the best effort of my green fingers weave a poem that dignifies the diamond in that rough.

~When the storm within- rages into words you can't hold it in. When trying to hold back, you lose the battle, you couldn't possibly win. Then the words, will freely flow, the words within begin to grow. ~E.R.O This is a collection of poems i have composed. Both light and dark, fun and sad. Enjoy!

DISCLAIMER: The following is a parody of The Great Gatsby. The beliefs expressed by some of the characters do NOT represent my own. I also give my full respect to the victims and firefighters who gave their lives on 9/11. I do not necessarily hold any ill will towards anyone who is a fan of Arby's. I am not a fan of the Tesla Cybertruck or Elon Musk. Anyway, this is actually the secret lost chapter of the original book or something like that

when art speaks itself

The ringing of bells signifies freedom and liberty.

ONE-SHOT

for you.

February 2, 2014. 8:56 AM

This lyric poetry is about that freezing morning when for the first time I decided to pen my thoughts into something I was unaware of , I didn't have a clue what it would become ,I just wanted something my way to come.

A collection of poems and stories 💕

Thank you all for helping me reach 100 votes on a story! This has been a goal of mine since I joined Wattpad a few years ago. Enjoy some Jotaro musings in celebration. Not in the vein of my 1000 read celebration (sadly), this work is intended to be read as a companion piece to the fifteenth chapter of Eloquence.

my pride future is a story I wrote to address issues in our society and it had three version one English, Hindi and Portuguese

A collection of evocative poetry by yours truly. Cover art and poetry by Sara Hickli.

My interpretation of poetry. I'm trying new writing styles, I'm trying to see which is a good fit for me. Let me know what you think. Thank you!