Eloquence Stories

eloquence ˈɛləkwəns/ noun - the art of using language in an apt, fluent way • lyrics in their true form - words.

Constructive poetry: a new genre of poetry that uses insubstantial nuggets of writing as the seeds to grow more robust and lush wordscapes, and a collaborative opportunity in which the Wattpad community can lend a hand in propagating this garden of beauty. Did you ever read an inspirational quote and think, "That's not all that deep, let alone inspirational," or a platitude and find, "This doesn't speak to me," or a poem that made you wonder, "That's an interesting idea, but could it be fleshed out more?" If so, and you would like to see the potential of such incomplete or underdeveloped pieces of writing realized, these constructive poems might satisfy that curiosity. These poems strive to take trite, unpolished, disappointing, and just outright bad writing, and through some added effort, nuance, and a little verbosity, transform them into something greater. The poems that will make up this collection are all inspired by cliched expressions, uninspired instapoetry, failed aphorisms and other instances of terse writing in need of a makeover. You may think of this "Constructive Poetry" as the antithesis of so-called "blackout poetry," insofar as, rather than erasing what is ugly to make something more beautiful, the goal is to improve impoverished writing through upbuilding, through fine-tuning and embellishing, through constructive criticism baked into a failure's own remix. The fuel for these poems comes in the form of crude writing, of which I am not aware of all instances. Submit a particular piece of writing you find particularly lacking (source cited, please) and I will with the best effort of my green fingers weave a poem that dignifies the diamond in that rough.

🎀 Elegance isn't how you present yourself, but is how you behave. You are Elegant when you know your worth and carry yourself with confidence. That's what Elegance is and it does wonders on the people around you. But sometimes, Elegance can take a dark turn. That dark turn which will make you fall in a cavernous abyss. "Don't cross the line, His Elegance wouldn't spare you." 🎀

Seriously, this must be one of my best ones yet! Not to brag, but I just think it is so eloquent, so perfectly written that it could make a grown man cry. I showed this to my pet turtle, he pissed himself, cracked three ribs, and DIED in the presence of its magnificence! My mom also read it and she gave me a gold star sticker. I hope you fine diddly dandy people enjoy it, and if you can, get ahold of New York Times so its greatness can be featured in one of their newspapers!

~When the storm within- rages into words you can't hold it in. When trying to hold back, you lose the battle, you couldn't possibly win. Then the words, will freely flow, the words within begin to grow. ~E.R.O This is a collection of poems i have composed. Both light and dark, fun and sad. Enjoy!

A collection of poems

A collection of evocative poetry by yours truly. Cover art and poetry by Sara Hickli.

New poems

DISCLAIMER: The following is a parody of The Great Gatsby. The beliefs expressed by some of the characters do NOT represent my own. I also give my full respect to the victims and firefighters who gave their lives on 9/11. I do not necessarily hold any ill will towards anyone who is a fan of Arby's. I am not a fan of the Tesla Cybertruck or Elon Musk. Anyway, this is actually the secret lost chapter of the original book or something like that

Thank you all for helping me reach 100 votes on a story! This has been a goal of mine since I joined Wattpad a few years ago. Enjoy some Jotaro musings in celebration. Not in the vein of my 1000 read celebration (sadly), this work is intended to be read as a companion piece to the fifteenth chapter of Eloquence.

" បងអាក្រក់ បងគ្មានធម៌មេត្តា មានចិត្តឃោរឃៅ ហើយអាត្មានិយម តែបងស្រលាញ់អូន " The king of Curse (ស្ដេចនៃបណ្ដាសារ) ជុងហ្គុក ហ្សានតូ

Arlo Wrenowski is your average girl. She's 23, lives in an apartment with her best friend Athena next door, she attends a prestigious university on a scholarship, where she maintains the top position in her class. Ovie O'Malley is the opposite, he's 25, lives in a large manor by himself, where he spends hours a day as a commissioned painter. This is their story.

A collection of words both happy and sad strewn together to create awful poetry.

Just a compilation of poetic works and late night thoughts..

❝ this tragedy is soaked with tears that dry the ink in my hands. ❞ ━ the poesy I've yearned to release ever since I taught myself to pick up the pen and write. ❝ for if the painting of my words be the garden upon the gate of heaven, glimpse them. behold the splendor of my haven. ❞ •• "𝑨𝒏𝒅 𝒃𝒆𝒇𝒐𝒓𝒆 𝒎𝒚 𝒕𝒊𝒎𝒆 𝒉𝒂𝒔 𝒆𝒏𝒅𝒆𝒅, 𝒎𝒚 𝒘𝒐𝒓𝒅𝒔 𝒎𝒖𝒔𝒕 𝒃𝒆 𝒄𝒐𝒏𝒇𝒆𝒔𝒔𝒆𝒅." 𝙿𝚘𝚜𝚜𝚎𝚜𝚜𝚎𝚍 𝚋𝚢 𝚝𝚑𝚎 𝙴𝚜𝚜𝚎𝚗𝚌𝚎 And just as the verse goes, a masterpiece was confessed, except it is timeless and will survive long after their time ends. "𝑺𝒐 𝒖𝒏𝒐𝒓𝒅𝒐𝒅𝒐𝒙𝒍𝒚 𝒆𝒏𝒊𝒈𝒎𝒂𝒕𝒊𝒄 𝒘𝒊𝒕𝒉 𝒘𝒐𝒓𝒅𝒔, 𝒔𝒐𝒂𝒌𝒊𝒏𝒈 𝒊𝒏𝒕𝒐 𝒕𝒉𝒆 𝒑𝒂𝒈𝒆𝒔 𝒐𝒗𝒆𝒓 𝒘𝒉𝒊𝒄𝒉 𝑰 𝒐𝒃𝒔𝒆𝒔𝒔." 𝚃𝚑𝚎𝚛𝚎 𝚒𝚜 𝚝𝚑𝚎 𝚜𝚠𝚎𝚎𝚝 𝚑𝚊𝚟𝚎𝚗 𝚘𝚏 𝚋𝚘𝚘𝚔𝚜 Poesy Of Eloquence is truly a book over whose pages we can obsess. Filled with emotions, at times raw, at times hurt, at times hurt, at others leaving you longing for love even rebellion in certain places. It captivates both the mind and heart. It is is uniquely eloquent, with vocabulary that some might find overbearing but it is such that it perfectly fits the complex emotions and hearts of humans, it adds an essence of elegance making the words dance similar to how our thoughts do when we read it. "𝑭𝒊𝒍𝒍𝒆𝒅 𝒘𝒊𝒕𝒉 𝒅𝒊𝒂𝒎𝒐𝒏𝒅𝒔 𝒂𝒏𝒅 𝒈𝒆𝒎𝒔, -𝒐𝒓 𝒔𝒐 𝑰 𝒉𝒂𝒗𝒆 𝒃𝒆𝒆𝒏 𝒕𝒐𝒍𝒅" 𝚃𝚑𝚎𝚢 𝚜𝚊𝚢 𝚒𝚝 𝚑𝚘𝚕𝚍𝚜 𝚝𝚑𝚎 𝚠𝚘𝚛𝚕𝚍 I do not always find quotable content, words such that I feel captivated. // Review by a reader.

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