Englishskills Stories

Hey This is my first english story, so I'm not really good in writing storys in my second language. But I try to improve my english skills with the stories. I'd appreciate some feedback. If you wanna read some german stories, watch my profile, mybe you're interested.

This is a story where the male lead does not end up with his first love (oh no spoiler). This is a story of loving, not owning.