Feedbacks Stories

A book club in which members are placed in teams called guilds, where they then work to give extensive feedback and win the victory!

LJ has learned to never be hopeful. Hope is the most destructive emotion of all of them. LJ knew the only way to achieve what you want is to work for it...that didn't even guarantee success. Success didn't guarantee happiness. Everyday she worked hard to find her slice of happiness, she definitely didn't expect to find it in Division 1 Wide Receiver who's everything she's not. Callum lives his life one football season at a time. After all, he is the number one wide receiver at a top university. He loves his life - all the girls and recognition. This is why he works so hard. His freshman year in college. He led his team to a title. Everyone is expecting him to lead the team there again this year. Callum's whole life has been about football...until he meets LJ. 

Welcome to Crescent Book Club, where you get to share your stories and exchange feedbacks with other members. This book club is for writers who are looking for a more easygoing place to do read-for-reads with valuable comments. Not so much pressure. Minimal requirements. Everyone is welcome, as long as you follow the rules.

"You know something! Just-" He scoffed in impatience, curling in on himself slowly, "God, Pomni. I- I just-" Pomni rested her hand on his shoulder, easing him of his greater tension as his legs sat agape. The jester sighed, "I know you've lost some pretty important people here," the jester looked as Jax crossed his arms. "Look, I get that you're trying to forget about this, but that's probably the worst that you can do." Jax scowled at Pomni, "What do you know?" He paused, getting up and walking forwards slightly, "You know nothing about me. You know nothing about this place you just got here." "I know that, but-" Jax looked at the jester, his pupils small only to frighten Pomni. "You don't know Zooble, you don't know Ragatha and what she's done, you don't know Kaufmo, and you didn't-" he swallowed bitterly, pointing at Pomni and getting rather close only to back off, "you didn't know Ribbit." ---- we're so back GAAANG !!!!! this story is mostly about jax coping through ribbit and kaufmo's abstraction and then pomni is there to help !!! her helping kiiinda turns into them dating but that's besides the point... you guys are only here for the chill fellas lore.. obviously. this fanifc has motifs, so PLEEEASE enjoy my masterpiece, my life's work, and understand that this is not canon and i don't own these characters or show ! thank you thank you !!! this updates EVERY WEDNESDAYYYY !!!!!! i also tweak out about their progressing relationship after every chapter ^^ Warnings: Digitalized-gore Mentions of self-harm Mentions and implications of sex Self Sabotage Jax Cover art by me !

ミ★ 𝐎𝐩𝐞𝐧 ★彡 Du wolltest schon immer mal bei einem Covercontest teilnehmen, hast Dich aber nie getraut? Oder suchst Du nach neuen Herausforderungen und willst Dich mit anderen messen, hast aber keinen guten Contest gefunden? Wenn Du nach der Möglichkeit suchst, ein ehrliches und konstruktives Feedback zu Deinen Covern zu erhalten, dann ist dieser Contest genau die Chance für Dich. Ich gestalte unterschiedliche Runden mit spannenden und abwechslungsreichen Themen. Hast Du Lust bekommen? Dann melde Dich gerne in der derzeitigen offenen Runde an.

(OPEN) Whiskers and Writing is all about cats and books! Functions like most book clubs, but with a few occasional twists and turns. We're all about relaxing, having fun, and talking with new people! You don't have to love cats or own cats to join this club, all you need is to love writing and reading on Wattpad😸. (Cats and clans are just fun additions, not affecting how the club works really) (P. S please spread the club! Greatly appreciated:)) Discord for club (not required): in my account bio ~ Founder, Evangeline🩷

this is a place for honest, constructive critiques-no sugarcoating, but no tearing down either. if you're looking for feedback on your plot, characters, pacing, or anything in between, i got you. let's make your story the best it can be.

Visualize healing in words??? This isn't a full story. It's me testing a concept of my voice. The chapters don't follow a plot - They're just pieces of something I'm trying to figure out. If you read it - and make you feel something. Please let me know. That's all I'm after<3

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I always wanted to do a literary audit

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I wrote this book because I've spent years watching intelligent, capable professionals struggle with the same communication challenges over and over again. Not because they're not smart enough. Not because they don't care enough. But because nobody ever taught them the fundamental principles of how communication actually works in groups. They were thrown into teams and told to collaborate. Told to "communicate better." Told to "work together." But nobody explained what that actually means. Nobody gave them a framework for understanding why groups succeed or fail. Nobody taught them that communication isn't just about sending clear messages-it's about constructing social realities together. So they default to trial and error. They rely on instinct. They copy what they've seen other people do, even when those people were doing it wrong. And the cycle continues.

"𝐑𝐞𝐚𝐝𝐢𝐧𝐠 𝐭𝐚𝐤𝐞𝐬 𝐮𝐬 𝐩𝐥𝐚𝐜𝐞𝐬 𝐭𝐨 𝐠𝐨 𝐰𝐡𝐞𝐧 𝐰𝐞 𝐡𝐚𝐯𝐞 𝐭𝐨 𝐬𝐭𝐚𝐲 𝐰𝐡𝐞𝐫𝐞 𝐰𝐞 𝐚𝐫𝐞." - 𝐌𝐚𝐬𝐨𝐧 𝐂𝐨𝐨𝐥𝐞𝐲 All of us know the importance of books, don't we? An escape from reality, a friend, a teacher, and a dream we hold in our hands. Reading a book brings joy, but that feeling of pure enthusiasm when you discuss it with a friend cannot be replaced by anything. Books and Celestine, both are about inner peace and quiet space. So here we are, The Gemme Community, with our Celestine Club. With the objective of bringing writers and readers together, this book club will serve as a place where you get to give and take recommendations, read, discuss, make friends, and most importantly, improve! Join in, and let yourself shine like the true gem you are! Cover by: SantanartEN Rules by: Author_Ankita

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Hi! Ever wanted to know what one of those super extroverted and positive people are really going through? Hi, I. Ema! A 20 year old adult. After being diagnosed with 2 autoimmune diseases, rejected over 20 times in the last 8 years and have experience in all sorts of life's challenges, allow me to tell you everything I know

Nori is a retired magical girl. After an underground experiment with the government goes wrong, holes to different universes rip open, and coming in or out of those holes makes you a shell of your despair, making you destroy everything in sight, putting the city in danger. The government loves to cover everything up, so they recruit Nori as a magical, hiding the operation from her. At the end of her term, when everything had been resolved, instead of a fulfilling ending, she got a spoonful of poison. The truth. 12 years later, cold and hardened, she is called back for a mentorship program. Mentee: Haru, who should be given an award. For being the worst magical girl ever. She meets all the standards at first glance: kind, helpful, and bubbly. But when it comes to fighting, she...Barfs. How will this rookie and expert merge? Only one way to find out. One, two, three, transform! ˚₊‧꒰ა ☆ ໒꒱ ‧₊˚ Project Magical Girl: Reboot!

The world pauses a moment, giving him time to finally catch his breath. The racket of the hustle and bustle goes quiet and the chatter of passing folk fade away. He shifts a little to adjust his glasses and his feet catches on a small rock. His life- the ups and downs and the failures and successes in it replay to him on a tape in his mind as it did. His misses and hits, his joys and sadness and everything brought him to this precipice of melancholy- his lost love and found hope causes him to sit in silence with the world, all in awe of a stone rolling downhill.

Welcome! I'm a beta reader and book editor. This story shows common plot mistakes and how to fix them. Authors, feel free to DM me if you want feedback on your work. I thought finishing my first draft meant success. I even celebrated with ice cream. Then my beta reader started reading. "Wait... why does your hero disappear for three chapters?" "And didn't you say the villain was scared of fire? Why is he lighting a bonfire?" That's when I realized: every manuscript needs a fresh pair of eyes before publishing. Beta readers are like story detectives. We notice pacing issues, inconsistent characters, and plot holes, the things you might not even see in your own manuscript. If you're a writer working on your first draft or looking to polish your story, I'd be happy to beta read your first chapter for free. DM me and let's make your story shine

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