Ranger74352
This is a short story I wrote for a project in English 12. I thought it was quite good, and I got a very high mark on it, so I thought I might post it on here and see what the rest of the world thought.
It was part of a project on the Shakespeare play Othello. It was intended to showcase a "tragic flaw", like the tragic flaws that all heroes in tragedies have. We were supposed to envision ourself as the protagonist of a tragedy, and write a story, illustrating our "tragic flaw". This is mine.
Since I'm interested in the onions of other, concerning my writing, please feel free to comment or criticise on my work. I won't be able to improve if people don't let me know what needs improvement. :)
Now, without further ado, enjoy the story!