Tanda Stories

¿Sera eso verdad de que las escuelas con tanda o jornada extendida en la República Dominicana, ha sido el mejor sistema educativo que han implantado en el país y que ha contribuido con la formación de mejores jovenes? ¿Sera este sistema el motivo por el cual muchas personas han perdido el apego hacia sus familiares, amigos y personas mas cercanas? ¿Cuales son los verdaderos objetivos de este sistema?¿ Esta logrando este sistema esos objetivos ? Lee mi articulo y dime tu, que piensas....

Tanda was born with the ability to see people's time. Everyone, children, teens, adults, elders, everyone had a clock above their heads that counts down to their deaths. These clocks and jump and change depending on a person's actions. Tanda never tried to change them, she never thought she could. When her close friend nearly got hit by a truck, Tanda pulled her to safety, changing the clock. Tanda's own clock suddenly vanishes. Now Tanda must learn the consequences of changing someone's time. This is a short story. If it does well, I might expand the idea to a novel.