Yaz017
Alice, Cinderella, Goldilocks, Little Red, Hansel and Gretel get sucked up into... a somewhat paradox.
WHO or WHAT created it? Will they find their way home? Will they find the creator?
Stick around to answer these BIG questions...
[ Writing Advice By Yaz: (mainly for @Starean, but use if wanted):
If it is first person, imagine you ARE that character.
Said is dead! - Don't use said that much, use verbs like stated, bellowed, spoke, announced etc. Or describe how they said it or what they were doing when they spoke; said loudly, he said as he picked up his glass full of wine, she said as she threw herself on the chair etc.)
Maybe break the fourth wall!!! (Example: How do I know, I'm just the narrator!) ]
{ Author's extra notes:
Sorry if it isn't good, this is my first time. T-T
None of the characters belong to me.
I can't reply to comments my mum won't let me soz. :(
I may change the cover over time, but the name will always be the same.
I'll probably take breaks of writing over time, but I promise I'll finish it.
My goal for this is to get an animator to see and animate it!
The actual chapters will be NUMBERED. (1, 2, 3)
Yes, Goldilocks and Alice WILL end up together in the end.
If anyone ships HanselXGretel romantically or MinorXAdult in this story: I will find them, and (potentially) murder them. NOT IN MY HOUSE!!!
It took ages to type out the screen in Chapter 4.
Please spread word about this story, it would help massively. (E.g making fanart, posting abt it etc.) Thanks!
Sorry for the chaotic storyline, I'll try make it more calm in the next few chapters. (Maybe...)
I will not be connecting with readers sorry. (Unless I know them irl.) }
Links:
Playlist:
https://open.spotify.com/playlist/4tLwDoI0pIsJTHAgueW9QJ?si=eDrw4B_cSZ-w2AjPi5pH4g&utm_source=copy-link&pi=E2QwpdhQTbWRk