Betareaders Stories

A story about a girl named Eleonora Valenstein from Nealux Kingdom. She fled with her father's friend to Qin. She hid her true identity, but will it stay hidden for long? Disclaimer: I don't own any character from the anime "Kingdom"

Hiya! My name is CG and I am a beta reader! You might've seen me around. But I review people's stories/novels here on Wattpad and upload my thoughts and opinions on my YT channel! When I feel like making a video about something that is. The main stories I read are fantasy, horror, and sci-fi. I also read the occasional historical Fiction. But if you make a good case for your story, I'll check it out regardless of the genre! Though I should mention I avoid non fiction. But this will be where I give a quick review of the current story I am reading. BYE! Have a fantastical day and or night! -CG

NOT TAKING ANY SUBMISSIONS CURRENTLY Want an honest review from a fellow writer and avid reader? Please keep reading to find out how....

Every author needs fresh, impartial eyes before publishing. Beta reading is that essential stage where you discover how your story will truly land with readers - before it reaches the world. As a beta reader, I help you: 📖 Identify plot holes and inconsistencies 💬 Improve unnatural or forced dialogue 🧠 Make your characters more believable 📈 Strengthen pacing and structure 💡 Receive honest, respectful, and constructive feedback Before the editing, the cover, or pressing "publish" - comes the beta read. That's where I come in: with a reader's heart, a critical eye, and a deep respect for your creative voice.

We all know how hard it is to get real feedback, and to meet writers who share the same passion as we do, so we here at the tLoW decided to make a group specifically for those of you who want to improve your writing, meet new friends, and achieve your goals, all whilst keeping your time in mind. If you're interested in learning more, make sure to click that little 'Read' button!

This is just a few things. If your interested in helping me a lil bit then read it it's easy.

Henry James (you can call me Hank), has "special" dreams. His dreams are about the future; dreams are about people he's never met; people who have one thing in common: they're going to be murdered. One more note about Hank's future dreams -- the future does not want to be changed.

Você colocou seu coração em cada capítulo, pensou nos mínimos detalhes da trama e quer entregar sua história da melhor forma possível aos seus leitores. Mas antes de apertar "publicar", que tal contar com um olhar externo, honesto e cuidadoso? Eu sou Jenifer, beta reader, e estou aqui para te ajudar a lapidar sua história com qualidade, comprometimento e respeito à sua voz como autor(a). Gêneros que leio com carinho e atenção: Romance, Fantasia, Drama, Suspense, Young Adult e muito mais! O que você pode esperar do meu serviço? • Leitura crítica e construtiva: Comentários sinceros, sempre com respeito, apontando pontos fortes e sugerindo melhorias com base no que sua história precisa. • Foco em coerência e fluidez: Verifico se a narrativa está fazendo sentido, se os personagens estão consistentes e se o ritmo está adequado. • Honestidade e ética: Seu trabalho será tratado com seriedade e confidencialidade. Nada de julgamentos - apenas sugestões para torná-lo ainda melhor. • Atenção aos detalhes: Desde erros sutis de continuidade até sugestões de diálogos mais naturais - estou aqui para ajudar a deixar sua obra pronta para brilhar. Se você quer alguém para te acompanhar nesse processo com empatia, transparência e dedicação, me chama! Vamos transformar sua história no melhor que ela pode ser. me mande mensagem aqui no Wattpad mesmo! Vai ser um prazer ler você!

Princess Samara is on the run after a shapeshifter murders her father and takes his form. The shapeshifter also steals the king's ring, which grants him the ability to bring statues to life. This launches the young princess into a quest to find a magic dagger and liberate her kingdom, all the while being hunted by living statues. She makes new friends along the way to comfort the shapeshifter in an epic showdown. I am looking for beta readers for this story. At the end of the story there would be a brief survey that I hope people will fill out and send to me. Once I get enough feedback I will do another draft of this story.

Excitement? Adventure? A caterpillar catcher craves not these things, but sometimes they are thrust upon them in great quantities. Ellifleur and Godric, following a series of unfortunate events, are thrust in to the wilderness with nothing but their wits and their belongings in a red spotted hanky. Little do they know, the witch finders are hunting down the last surviving witch and Ellifleur is it.

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Hi everyone, it's Geneva Rousseau 💜 I'm officially opening beta-reading and beta-editing services for BTS fanfiction writers. If you're working on a story and want help refining it, I've got you covered in two ways: 🖤 Beta-Reading I'll read your chapters and give detailed feedback on: Plot clarity & pacing Character development Dialogue & emotional impact What's working + what can be improved ✍️ Beta-Editing I'll go into your Google Doc and help polish your writing: Grammar & sentence flow Clarity and readability Light edits while keeping your original voice 📌 How to submit: Fill out the Google Form linked in my bio. ✨ I only take a limited number of requests at a time so I can give each story proper attention. Turnaround time depends on length, but I'll always be honest about timing before starting. If you're serious about improving your story, I'm here to help bring it to life 🖤 - Geneva Rousseau

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Hey everyone, thank you for picking this for a read. This is just a preview as I am looking to get feedback. For this book as I am close to publishing book 2. I want to know how the story flows, grammar and anything else that may be odd in here. For seventeen years, Autumn has lived a lie. Autumn has always felt like she was a freak, even among her packmates. Yes, packmates she's a werewolf. The approach of her eighteenth birthday is dangerously close, her Awakening, a time where wolves can seek out their mates. A time where they grow into themselves and discover who they will be. It is time to awaken the powers within. Whom will she trust by her side? A time for enemies to rise and allies to fall. Will the beast within bring chaos and destruction? Or will love conquer and triumph above all?

If you are looking for a beta, I'm your gal! I have lots of free time and am willing to beta anything!