Criticism Stories

[OPEN] Astania's book club for those who wish to have a stress-free, non-structured environment. You can choose any member's book to read, and receive engagement on your own book in the process! See our profile for other book clubs!

[OPEN] Astania's book club for those in search of a structured format and constructive feedback. Sign up to be placed in bi-weekly pairings, where you'll read six chapters and exchange extensive comments! See our profile for other book clubs!

I've spent a lot of time thinking about what it truly means to call the Philippines 'HOME.' It's a place of incredible warmth and breathtaking beauty, but it also has its shadows and its struggles. I decided to put those feelings into words. My new poetry collection on Wattpad, Chosen Land, Beloved Beat , is my honest tribute to our country-capturing both the gold and the grit of our islands. I'd love for you to take a look and let me know which piece resonates with you the most. Follow me on Wattpad if you want, I am John Mark N. Luciano (@DonJuanMarco), if you saw the name of Moriones Zazadevha, that was my former Wattpad account. I would be publish One Poem, on Friday, Saturday and Sunday. 12:00 am(Philippine Time) (All criticism will be accepted as long as it does not contain any foul language or insults. Let us keep our Good Manners and Right Conduct. To God be the Glory.)

He didn't just choose her. He recognized her, not for what she pretended to be, but for what she already was. This story wasn't about beauty as the world defines it. It was about what remains when the noise fades. Dignity, sincerity, grace that doesn't seek attention, but commands respect.

The characters belong to Masashi Kishimoto. This story is entirely my own work. If you've already read the first version of Scars of Royalty, you'll know what the story is about. But since I wasn't satisfied with the first version of this fanfic, I've decided to improve both the writing and the plot. Yes, there will be slight changes, but it's to improve the quality of the fanfic so you can enjoy it more. I apologize to all my readers who followed the first version of Scars of Royalty, and I thank you for reading it. I will do a better job. Thank you all very much.

➜ Sveiki! Welcome to 'the eastern review shop'. ₊ ⊹ ┆Receive personalized reviews to assist your writing skills, develop your book, and achieve your literature goals. - Learn your strengths, weaknesses and highlights with additional guidance on how to improve your work while embracing your books' individuality. What are you waiting for? Come on in! ۶۟ৎ This Review Shop has only recently been released, you can support it with votes, saves, comments and most importantly- review requests and submissions! Anything helps and is heavily appreciated. Thank you!

A newly divorced lawyer goes to visit his best friend in Montana to escape life. He finds out life is easier there and less stressful. Then his ex wife's realize life isn't as good as she thought it would be without him and tries to persuade him to return home and give them another try. Will he choose he past life or new life?

Looking for honest feedback without the drama? You've come to the right place! This review shop is all about thoughtful, kind, and straightforward critiques that help you grow as a writer-not tear you down. Whether it's a chapter, a summary, or just a scene you're unsure about, I've got you. I read carefully, give real feedback, and always respect your voice. Drop your work below, tell me what you want me to focus on, and let's level up your story together!

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[закрыто, возможно навсегда] Каждому из нас однозначно нужно мнение со стороны для некого толчка вперед. Здесь вас не станут позорить на всю сеть, а укажут на ваши ошибки и дадут личный, неповторимый совет. Работаю вместе с @_Seshka_ (удивите ее своим вниманием) !ВНИМАНИЕ! ОБЛОЖКА, КОТОРУЮ ВЫ НАБЛЮДАЕТЕ, БЫЛА СДЕЛАНА, ПРЕЛЕСТНЫМИ РУЧКАМИ fifti_fai.

King of Pop

The Ultimate GameCube Tier List! None had tried to rank at least a great portion of the wonderous system's library, so I thought to do it! As of now the list will be at about 135 video games from instant classics to the worst of shovelware! Some will be focused on quite a bunch while others will be breezed through, as this list will consist of games I've both completed and have not finished as of yet, but when I have something to say, boy will I have something to say! These ranking are all my opinion, and there is bound to be hot takes, so no flames! Also, expect spoilers...

Closed for catch up. It is what it says. For more information look inside. @lllumos made my beautiful cover for me

BEHOLD MY BRAG BOOK This is a portfolio of awards and reviews that Ancilla and its art have received, both on Wattpad and in the real world, due to being entered in real-world contests in addition to those on Wattpad. (I self-published Ancilla commercially about a month before I published an edition of it on Wattpad). Ancilla's rate of winning contests on Wattpad, according to Google's calculator, is about one contest in three - one in two if I only look at the contests that did not fizzle out before completing. Real-world contest win rate: zero. For general wins and losses, refer to my 2024 and 2025 Books of Contests. This portfolio displays reviews, score sheets, comments, press releases, and interviews. Nearly all the material contained herein is glowing and positive (of course) but I have also tucked in some negative material and contest fails, including a downright withering review from some guy at IndieReader. Dear reader, I hope you find this entertaining. If you are an independent pro author like me, I hope you also find it useful for your journey to success.

From the author that brought you the Wattpad Featured Guide, "Edit like an Editor." *Ranked #9 in constructive, #26 in critic, #32 in editor, and #3 in #freelance* Are you in need of an editor and constructive criticism? Looking to be professionally and/or self-published one day? Reach the next step towards polishing your story with the credible and reliable editorial freelancer, jgfairytales. My pro bono (volunteer) editorial services are closed indefinitely. However, my commissioned freelance services are OPEN. If you share your Wattpad profile with me when requesting my commissioned services, I may be able to offer you a discount! Learn more inside!

I'm looking for an editor maybe a friend as well

A critique shop for beginner writers

𝐓𝐡𝐞 𝐃𝐢𝐚𝐫𝐲 𝐨𝐟 𝐉𝐨𝐲 𝐩𝐫𝐞𝐪𝐮𝐞𝐥 We often hear about the fairies and magic, how perfect their world is but everything is not as it seems. Through this diary, we get a look into the life of an ordinary fairy. Finally, we can see if their day to day life is so perfect as we previously thought. Disclaimer I do not own any of the pictures used in the chapters.