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This is everything wrong someone did to me, how it impacted me, and how i may react the next time it may happen. Keep in mind i am not using real names, but if you know me you will know who is who.

When a girl's Perfect life starts to change because of a secret being dug up on a Dark Hallow-eve night. Emma and Her friend's found themselves in Old Man Rick's house on all Hallow-eves. People in town believe the house itself was curse and anyone who went in it would be too. But no one EVER dare go in till Emma and her group!

Chapter One My mind was filled with a bunch of circles. Circles. Why them? Why not a square or how about pentagon? No it has to be circles because no matter how fast I think or how far my thoughts go, they always travel back to its original spot. Always the same reason as to why I was thinking in the first place. But still why not- I was interrupted when I heard my mother shouting for me in her harsh voice. My eyes rolled and saw the back of my head for a split second. "Zimi! What the fuck are you doing that you can't listen to me!" Footsteps could be heard marching down the hallway to end right before my door. My body tensed as I waited for her to break down my doorway when she realized I had originally locked it. But this time she didnt. She did an outrageous thing. She knocked. "Uh, yes? M-mom." I couldn't steady my voice because I knew what was about to happen wouldn't be good. I need to calm down, I thought to myself as I did my special breathing techniques to calm my nerves. I could hear her exhale in a tone of disappointment. "We need to talk."

a war poem

Hey! I'm writing a story about 3 different people who all have one thing in common: They're insecure about the way the look, dress, or act. Thanks for reading and please give me feedback!

Hello! Would you like to build a community with me? If you like writing contests go ahead and add this to your library you know you want to😏. Since I am having issues with exposure I decided to try to build my own community where I can make friends, be guided, and learn new writing techniques. Well...What are you waiting for? Press read already. Impressive rankings: Number 1 In #writingcontest. Yay!!!!!

Jen was just your average 18 year old girl, that is until she meets the man himself Harry Styles... She is on a holiday to the Isle of Bute. Jen and her friends decide to go a little crazy one night a drink... A lot... They end up in a karaoke bar and Jen sets eyes on someone she thought she would never see... Would this one night stand change her life ? Will she be accepted into the world of showbiz and music?

I would like to get feedback on my short stories/excerpts that I have written. I will appreciate any critiques you give. This also is a chance for you to read some random stories. Please do not steal any of the work that I publish here.

✨Paige is a 17 year old girl that goes to a gifted camp with her dad. When she arrives she meets Trevor. She instantly falls in love but when Bella (her BFF) arrives will she fall for Trevor too. Who will he pick.more trouble unleashes when one of paiges bullys carmen goes to the camp and causes more problems.What happens if Paige's dad sees Trevor and Paige together (not saying they will they might) will he break them apart? Will they have to sneak around to see eachother? What if Bella goes out with Trevor? What will Paige do? It's all a mystery. But if you read: Śtârš Årė Płãśtįč You will figure out what happens.✨

A girl a boy they fall in love have a twist you got a story.....but you add some magical creatures with displeasing features and no romance, kidnapping ,and killing then you got a story but hey what do i know im just the maker and creator of the magical story about a witch who... find out more when you read.

Izuku Midoryia, A thought to be quirkless male who's mom died when he was only 6 and has become an infamous villian, has enrolled in UA. what he will do and why he will do it are mysteries yet to be solved.

This is a play I'm working on, as my school performs student-written one-act shows. It is based on my own personal experiances with DID, and I hope to submit and have my story be brought to life at the 2019 one-acts festival. This play is no where near complete. These are merely drafts of characters, scenes, and plots as I build up my story into a stage production. I'm publishing this solely to gage how my tale affects others, and for feedback on how to improve. There will be many edits made to this as time goes on. I hope you all enjoy! - Ryan

What would you do if you woke up in a strange room with your hands tied behind your back? What if you were silenced by the one who means the most of you when your the only one who knows the truth? What do you think Jax's next move will be in this crazy whirlwind of adventure he calls life? A/N: Still new to actually putting my stories out there, so any feedback would be nice, please and thank you. Oh yeah, enjoy your read!