Firstdraft Stories

(A fanfiction about the Commander and Howe.) The description and title are still a work in progress as is the story. Once I finish this first draft I'll revise it later in a way that will improve the overall narrative. That means the story will initially be awkward but improve over time. I'm open to constructive feedback and ideas as we progress. Leave them in the comments if you have one, I'll see if it works. Enjoy :) The characters and story picture are not mine. They are owned by Yongshi, Manjuu and Yostar.

COMPLETE FIRST DRAFT VERY SLOW EDITING IN PROCESS Adelaine Colbert, a seventeen-year-old college dropout, family failure and socially awkward. After dropping out of college and destroying her parents' dreams and ambitions she has a plan. Get a job, earn a couple of pennies, and then move out from her home. It was simple. So how can something so simple turn out so complicated in minutes? Things don't always go to plan especially when she finds out that she isn't the only one fighting for the job she so desperately needs. Adelaine is faced with a challenge for once, turning her whole life three hundred degrees around. She's left to play with fire but does she walk away before she burns herself? Or take a risk for once to feel happiness again?

The crash landed them in a small, tucked-away wooded area around the Appalachian Mountains. 3 people: Jack, Veronica, and Vanessa. The kids are struggling to survive. There is à catch they aren't alone here either something is watching them stalking from somewhere.

Lyra Stratos has been in a deep slumber for 10 years, hidden in a tower protected by the most powerful magic in the kingdom of Svilia; her kingdom. That is all about to change when one night, the rebel leader Dax wakes her to help his people and save her Svilia. Meanwhile Dax's brother, Vincent has overtaken the kingdom as a tyrant king but is now in search for his brother and Lyra; the hidden queen.

It is 1940, and a seventeen-year-old boy named Constantijn Rot is marching towards Russia, towards a death in the name of Adolf Hitler. A name, a man, a cause that Constantijn cannot believe in. A cause he will follow if he wants to stay alive. To resist the powerful force of an entire country, blood-hungry and headed by madmen, is suicide. He had every intention of keeping his mouth shut and his feet in line behind the one in front of him. But things change, and Constantijn is finding that both his feet and his hands are taking him much, much farther than he ever thought he could go. -ON HOLD- Dinah A Jewish name meaning 'the avenged one', or 'judgement' ~ Bear with me please I'm terrible at blurbs ~ ~ Also: cover art made by me! ~

Victorian England. The era of judgement. Can one man hide a secret that has lead others to their doom, or will the secret be free ending both life and love? Can he hide a killers face or will it be seen? Remember you are judged based on your friends and this one is a matter of life and death. Vampire Detective Rory turner finds himself on the wrong side of the law defending his wife Mary Turner. Famous killer. Final product here: https://www.amazon.co.uk/dp/B091N3RQDB/ref=mp_s_a_1_1?dchild=1&keywords=Cold+blood+by+Andrew+James+King&qid=1617640875&sr=8-1

[Completed] [Editing/Re-Writing] [10/9/19] Loren Lancaster has always been a pro at running from her problems, and this summer is no exception. After trading in a summer in the Hampton's for a season on the coast of small-town Georgia, Loren is determined to spend the summer after her freshman year of college as far away from her problems as possible. From an estranged father, a scorned mother, and an accusatory class of New York's elite, physical distance can't separate her from everything, though, especially with her overbearing older sister scrutinizing every decision she makes, acting more like her mother than the sister Loren desperately needs her to be. And when Rayston Point's golden boy Isaac Verano insists on befriending her, and tries desperately to charm his way to more, Loren can't help but shake the feeling that her summer's going to end with more trouble and heartbreak than she asked for.

Marianna is going into 9th grade and tries to keep onto friendships that aren't good for her. When will she realize that sometimes cutting things off isn't a bad thing , but so is getting back at the people who hurt you So what happens when she tries to get with her best friends crush and ends up with the crush's sister instead? !!BTW THIS IS MY FIRST STORY!! (feedback would be nice)

Eiver, half-mermaid, begins her first day at Sunflower Hill. What she doesn't know is that a vampire is joining her class. And there's also that weird new girl, that seems to have an interesting past. New friendships will be formed other will be lost forever, thrown away like yesterday's trash.

A book filled with poems written by me, (J. Eclipse). I hope you like some of them. They are usually written when I feel down or blue. Maybe you can relate to one or two.

"I can't live with myself. I want to forget." In a world where humans have existed over a billion years, higher beings called gods and goddesses roam. Meet Death, the cold, slightly introverted god who has had a crush on Life for the past 750 million years. He knows she will never reciprocate, but loves her anyway. After having his heart broken by her unwittingly over and over again, he is finally presented a chance to get closer to her, but as their relationship develops, he realizes that the secrets he keeps from her could very well rip her apart and tear her away from him forever. Friendship is supposed to be built on love and trust, not secrets and lies. What happens when the brutal truth shreds reality? Amazing cover made by @sun-tan-aka, thank you! ----- #232 in Fantasy... wow! Thanks guys :D

The first draft of my current novel, and due to popular demand, I am uploading the old drafts as well. This one is from 2018. Note: this version is completely unrecognizable from the final.

In a world ravaged by a mysterious being known only as The Beast, the streets run red with blood and are cluttered with the corpses of billions. Sadie, a broken husk of the woman she once was, is forced to try her best at keeping her group together against impossible circumstances. They look to her for guidance, but all she wants is to lie and rot. Charlie, a teen boy, learns there are things much worse than unrequited love or that which goes on behind a locked door. (This is a first draft, meaning some details are subject to change)

An assortment of poems about love, heartache, and finding your way back. (Still a work in progress) -Would adore any feedback

When a star Angel Falls all Hell breaks loose. Wren is sentenced to treason for a crime she didn't commit, and when she can't prove her innocence. The Hidden Angel Society blinds Wren for punishment, does this put a damper on her fire or is it just fueled on.

[Currently in First Draft Stage] "You see, there are exceptions to all statements, and what I'm about to show you is one of them. I'll try my hardest to interpret emotion in this story, but fair warning, some may be lost in translation. Even after a few million years, I still don't fully understand your species."

FIRST DRAFT!! Kaladin is a guy who hates a normal village life and he wants to travel the world of Pholaieon. Will Ornello guide him? What's gonna happen when Kaladin meets Neoma? Are they gonna be friends, nemesis or lovers? (I'm sorry for any grammar mistakes or misspellings! Eng is not my native lang!)

When a fiercely independent girl loses all faith in humanity and trusts no one but herself with herself and her money, she's on her way to being a Scrooge. A She-Scrooge, to be specific. But this Scrooge met her ghosts of Christmas Past, Present, and Future at the same time... and a few other ghosts along the way. Join Raven as she goes through trials and tribulations of high school, guys, camp, bars and brothers.

Perseverance. My hopes is that this story may help others who are in pursuit of their own betterment despite a past of negativity induced both by self and 3rd party. (This story is incomplete) The continuance will be available soon This is a rough draft. All criticism welcome

Note to Self - short, messy poems based on life Read and enjoy if you want :) ◇◇ ◇◇ ◇◇ ◇◇ ◇◇ ◇◇ ◇◇ ◇◇ Started: 9/29/20 Ended: