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Rewire Your Mind, Reclaim Your Life! ⚠️ If you're not serious about making a real change in your life - close this book right now. This is not a feel-good book. This is a do-something book. Change doesn't happen by chance. It happens by choice - over and over again. And most people never get what they want because they keep waiting to "feel ready." Here's the truth: - You're never going to feel fully ready. - No one is coming to save you. - And the time you think you still have... is running out. This book is a collection of tools, truths, and techniques designed to wake you up - and keep you going. You'll learn how to rewire your thinking, reset your energy, and take full responsibility for what comes next. You'll get real, practical methods that you can use immediately to start becoming who you actually want to be. Let this be your turning point. Let's begin.

INSTA ART ACCOUNT: Soddaacan Don't be shy! Please take a look at this if you're interested in how much I've improved over the past ummmm.... 3-4 years

They say the past must be put aside- Learn to let your life continue without them. But what if among the healthy-minded people of the earth, there's one person who simply just... Refuses? "Fate will shed tears after I manhandle my way out of the inevitable." Etched into his growing existence are the words: "I'll make it this time." Failure after failure; over and over and over again. But everyone has their limits. And frankly, this one's breaking point is long overdue. ₊˚ ✧ ━━━━⊱⋆⊰━━━━ ✧ ₊˚ 𝓟𝓪𝓻𝓲𝓼 𝓐𝓾𝓬𝓵𝓪𝓲𝓻 - a rising pianist who dreams to be even bigger in her field one day. Working hard to get her name recognized by potential producers or endorsers while coping through an arranged marriage, she meets someone who is able to provide warmth and comfort to the cold, monotone life she's living. 𝓚𝔂𝓻𝓸 𝓐𝓻𝓰𝓱𝓪𝓬𝓱𝓲𝓲 - a simple-living photographer who seems to want nothing else except taking pictures for his memory board and spending time with her. Though deemed annoying at first, he makes his way into her life and helps her through her supposedly hidden misfortunes. But is that really all there is to it? ₊˚ ✧ ━━━━⊱⋆⊰━━━━ ✧ ₊˚ !! ALL IMAGES I USED AND PROBABLY WILL USE IN THIS BOOK (including the base image in the cover) ARE FROM PINTEREST !! THIS BOOK- THE STORY, THE PLOT, THE CHARACTERS, ETC. ARE ALL ORIGINALLY MADE BY ME. I DO NOT ALLOW ANYONE TO TRANSLATE OR REWRITE MY WORK (CLAIM IT AS THEIRS) NO MATTER WHAT. ctto.

ᵃʳᵗ 𖦹 𝗲𝘃𝗲𝗿𝘆𝘁𝗵𝗶𝗻𝗴. ໑˙ . ꒷ 🍰 Vᴇʀʏ ʟɪᴛᴛʟᴇ ᴏғ ᴛʜᴇ ᴀʀᴛ ᴏɴ ʜᴇʀᴇ ɪs ᴍᴀᴅᴇ ᴡɪᴛʜ ᴀ ʀᴇғᴇʀᴇɴᴄᴇ ᴡɪᴛʜᴏᴜᴛ ᴛʀᴀᴄɪɴɢ, ᴛʜᴀᴛ's ɴᴏᴛ ᴡʜᴀᴛ ʙᴇɪɴɢ ᴀɴ ᴀʀᴛɪsᴛ ɪs ᴜɴʟᴇss ʏᴏᴜ ᴅᴏɴᴛ ᴄʟᴀɪᴍ ɪᴛ ᴀs ʏᴏᴜʀs. ᴅᴏɴ'ᴛ sᴛᴇᴀʟ.

The first step is finding yourself, the second step is accepting what you find... A book that'll be filled with my healing process from my past of my struggles with perfectionism, fear, uncertainty, failure, and how I learned to embrace my authentic self and discover my true potential in the world. Healing is not just about mending physical wounds, but also about addressing emotional pain, trauma, and finding inner peace. It involves learning to let go of past hurts, practicing self-compassion, and cultivating a positive mindset. Through self-reflection, understanding, mindfulness practices, and seeking support from others, I began to gradually heal and become more resilient. It's a process that requires patience, courage, and vulnerability, but ultimately leads to profound personal transformation and empowerment. Through my story, you'll find inspiration and practical advice on how to face your fears, cultivate resilience, find peace within yourself, get rid of toxicity, and live a life that truly reflects who you are. This is a story about finding myself, even when the path ahead seems unclear, and learning to trust myself and my own passions. This book will depict all of my past relationships with people and help me come with peace to what has happened. But what's harder, is to realize that I'm in the closet about a lot of my emotions and feelings. It's a relatable and empowering tale of self-discovery, perfect for anyone looking to find their way and live a more authentic life with me recalling my memories, expressing them, and sharing a lot of heartfelt scars, but taking steps to heal from the open wounds. In the end, we are all human, and that's what matters. © Junii | (12) (December) 2025.

Mario tries to be a better person, but does he succeed? Find out! (Cover made by me on sfm)

(Playlist Collection) One Shot Story Pretty Hurts song by Beyonce ***** Ang istoryang ito ay parte ng Playlist Collection kung saan parte ang mga kanta/musika na aking naririnig upang maging inspirasyon upang gawing isang istorya.

Exactly what it says on the tin! Closed until further notice, working on current requests! cover art by: seaweed057 (DeviantArt) please do not trace, edit or repost!

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Animals, the climate, rainforests & the ocean need your help. Read this book in order to learn what you can do to help save the planet! The planet is in danger because of us humans and what we are doing to it. You have no reason whatsoever to not read this book. 2019

Here's my second art book. Same as the first, you can use the drawings if you give me credit. What more do you want from me?

I always dreamed of being a manga artist or animator. I wish I will fulfil my dream someday. Untill then I will work hard and improve as much as I can. In this book you will find my drawings. Please do not expect some "excellent pieces of art" since I have some pretty average art skills. Also I think I will update pretty slow so yeah ^^. Criticism is always gracefully accepted! P.S. My english isn't the best, I usually use a translator (like google) to check my mispelling errors. (*Cover made by me)

In which I help you with faceclaims and how to improve your story! ©️2018-MELLZZO

ᵃʳᵗ 𖦹 𝙜𝙚𝙣𝙨𝙝𝙞𝙣 𝙞𝙢𝙥𝙖𝙘𝙩. ໑˙ . ꒷ 🍰 . 𖦹˙- ᴀʟʟ ᴀʀᴛ ᴏɴ ʜᴇʀᴇ ɪs ᴍᴀᴅᴇ ᴡɪᴛʜ ᴀ ʀᴇғᴇʀᴇɴᴄᴇ ᴀɴᴅ ᴡɪᴛʜᴏᴜᴛ ᴛʀᴀᴄɪɴɢ. ᴛʜᴇ ᴄʜᴀʀᴀᴄᴛᴇʀs ᴅᴏɴ'ᴛ ʙᴇʟᴏɴɢ ᴛᴏ ᴍᴇ ᴏʙᴠɪᴏᴜsʟʏ. ᴛʜᴇʀᴇ's ɴᴏ ᴡᴀʏ ɪɴ ʜᴇʟʟ ɪ'ᴍ ᴄᴏʟᴏᴜʀɪɴɢ ᴛʜᴇsᴇ. ☠️ (ɪ ᴋɴᴏᴡ ʜᴏᴡ ᴛᴏ ᴄᴏʟᴏʀ ʙᴜᴛ ɪ ᴅᴏɴ'ᴛ ᴡᴀɴɴᴀ ʀᴜɪɴ ᴛʜᴇ ᴅʀᴀᴡɪɴɢs) ໑˙ . ꒷ 🍰 . 𖦹˙-

Basically a place to post my drawings. Formerly "Pokemon Art Book". I expanded it to include other fandoms as well. Please do not steal my art, I work very hard on it.

Art from wence i twas a child... blehh. Just a personal little history book for me. :p

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"You know the kind of people who use their intelligence to hide just how intelligent they are? Yeah, I'm one of them." «»«»«» May Jones, an ex-manipulator, is on the journey of finding herself. When she meets the goofy, adorable and kind Blaze Daniels, her life seems to become ten times more complicated. «»«»«» "Don't," she said, "come near me. I'll ruin you. I'll destroy you without you even knowing it." He smiled. A gentle, soft smile that clearly indicated that he was about to do the opposite of what she'd just told him. "Then ruin me," he said simply, closing the distance between them and pressing his lips against hers. «»«»«»