Revised Stories

Bookworm and recently widowed, Lucy Hobbs has lived a sheltered life. The only danger she has ever faced was turning the pages of a murder mystery novel. All of that is about to change. It's Halloween, Lucy's favourite time of year, but it's more than just a holiday-it's her grandfather Alfred's 87th birthday. After months of grieving, this is the one thing she has been looking forward to. But, little does Lucy know she is walking into a family feud, a lost sheep, and murder. On the day of Alfred's Will reading, Lucy learns of some unexpected changes that cause her to look at the events of the birthday party in a new light. Can Lucy figure out who the murderer is before they strike again?

My version of The Force Awakens with significant changes made to both characters and plot.

เข้าใจเพียงว่า ฉันยังรู้ว่าคุณเข้าใจใช่ไหม? :) A Hammabol Sorkesa Revised Edition. All rights reserved. 2014 (Pee Mak) Highest Rank: #554 in Adventure 02.09.18 #52 in Revised 02.04.21 #16 in mariomaurer 05.24.21

There is something missing from our world... the amazing animals that time has left behind. but what if we could bring them back? what if extinction didn't have to be forever? Inspired by Prehistoric Park, This Video game concept sends you, the player back in time on a safari with a difference to rescue the mighty dinosaurs from the brink of extinction, to bring them to the safety of the present and give them a second chance. Then it is up to you to build the greatest zoo on Earth, where the past meets the present. Welcome to Dinosaur Reserve! (Revised Edition)

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Won't Let You Go Letting go of someone that means so much to you is painful. Forgetting is a choice. They are the essential actions on moving on. It seems that the once blissful moments will never be the same again and will forever remain as bittersweet memories. Rees became vulnerable and was benumbed by her bygones. And it's apparent to the people who care for her. She's in the process of starting over again when she met two lads; Trevor, who got her mystified, and Andrew, who make her feel warm and familiar. As the time goes by, they realized that they're being entangled with their feelings. Will one of them be a help? If so, who will let go? cover made by: @leileilei22

(Made this at 5 in the morning first story I've ever done basically got this idea from the movie StarStruck.) Zayn Malik never cared about Liam Payne, his sister did enough obsessing for the both of them. So when a family trip lands him in Los Angeles, the last thing he expects is to literally run into Liam backstage at a club. One pop star. One door to the face. One chaotic weekend that might just change everything. A sarcastic, music-filled twist on fate, follows these two boys from completely different worlds as they crash into each other, literally, and find themselves tangled in secrets, car chases, expectations, and a connection that refuses to fade. It started with a door. It might just end with the truth.

A self-proclaimed rhyme-cognoscenti's first collection. Made to dedicate herself's thirteen-year-older version, which, of course, must be wrapped up before the day this litanies had made. Copr. 08,21,2021. AnndeeSydehd.

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Codie just moved. Funny thing, she doesn't remember much of her life before she moved into complex. She has strange neighbors and hears music when it's not there. Another minor detail, there is a demon boy with bipolar attributes that kinda has a thing for her,

THIS IS EDITED VERSION! TO READ THE OLD UNEDITED VERSION CHECK MY PROFILE! YOU'LL LOVE IT SURELY BUT IT HAS LOTS AND REALLY LOTS OF ERROR AND MISTAKES! She's smiling! She's laughing! She's roaming around! She's happy! She's not a right girl! She was passing her time! She was playing with him! She's a cunning girl! She's jerk! He's drinking! He's texting her! He's calling her! He's sad! He's depressed! He's a right guy! He was serious! He gave his heart to her! He's innocent guy! He's naive! But do you know the truth? She felt insecure! She is scared! He never trusted her! He never thought about her! He never asked her wish! ..................................................... Join the journey of a roller coaster ride of emotion! Because every smiling face is not happy! Edited Version!