Writersworkshop Stories

This is a book filled with my short stories

I by no means think of myself as an amazingly skilled writer. But that doesn't mean I cant critique So I've noticed common flaws on popular works on here. Easily avoided mistakes may I add! And it annoys me that stories with no heart, or even a decent plot, all get recommended to everyone. So, here I will be critiquing some Wattpad stories. More info in the first chapter.

𝐏𝐥𝐨𝐭𝐬 , 𝐅𝐚𝐜𝐞𝐜𝐥𝐚𝐢𝐦𝐬 , 𝐔𝐧𝐢𝐪𝐮𝐞 𝐍𝐚𝐦𝐞𝐬 , 𝐚𝐧𝐝 𝐌𝐎𝐑𝐄!

A girl, down on her luck, meets her celebrity idol at the coffeehouse she busts tables for. The guy leaves without a name, and a payphone is her only means of communication. What will happen; will these two collide or will she be sent to voicemail?

It seemed to the youth that once the dark fell everything had a strange way of changing form, even if only for a little while, just until the sun was once again high in the sky and life began again. Oftentimes the lad saw the partygoers leave the mansions with downcast faces, their only joy seemingly found in the social gatherings, parties, and crowds. (Constructive Critique Welcome)

Where we give away alternate words to make your writing stronger and more appealing.

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