BubbleLover234

Hey 30 minutes got deleted so I'm re-writing it so its going to be differant

viviloves2write

ok so i was reading chapter three and I'm confused...are there 2 Jakes? cause there is one at the end of chapter two and a new one in chapter 3. i think i went back and looked, but just curious. Your story is coming along really good, i guess there are certain things missing in order to make things a little clearer to people reading it.