This is the beginning of a book: I don't really like it how can I fix it help
Yasmine wakes up groggily lifting up her hand from her computer mouse and wiping her saliva, as she says " I must have over slept"..
YASMINE! Her mom yells from down stairs . COMING ! she yells back
Yasmine walks downstairs and as she does her mom asked her"Do you realize you overslept?If you don't hurry your going to be late !" I know mom but late nights always make me groggy the next morning .
Yeah whatever . Go get dress Yasmine ..
I was trying to but you interrupted me . But anyways , make me breakfast please?!
Or what do ya think about it