FrozenFire13

@EmilyCharlotteCooledge Hi! I would be more than willing to critique your book again. Which one would you like to me critique? By the way, I apologize for not remembering, but which of your stories was the one I critiqued? I'm very glad that my advice helped you! 

EmilyCharlotteCooledge

Hello, I don't know if you remember me but many many months ago I asked you to critique my book. I found your advice very helpful and it made me the author I am today. I was wondering if you could do the same again and point out any mistakes? Thank you anyways - E C Cooledge :)