NyIsntAwake
Thanks for adding "The Fall" to your reading list! It's a first draft so it's kind of all over the place, buy nonetheless I hope you enjoy(ed) it!
NyIsntAwake
@GirlWithDragonWings aww thanks bud. And the revised version has one or two chapterd up if u want. And it seems the first few stories are always a mess
GirlWithDragonWings
@NyLovesBooks Well, it's still a good story! (Much better than my first story, which was terrible.) I can't wait to read the revised version!
NyIsntAwake
@GirlWithDragonWings ya that's my problem with it too, the pkot is rushed and everywhere. I wrote it when I was kind of young and posted it because "what do i have to lose," so now in the revised version I'm trying to even out the plot. I appreciate the feedback though!
