L J Williams

The final chapters to Inescapable have been published - Book One is now complete  
          I’d really appreciate ANY feedback, this is my first draft and I intend to perfect the story to publish  
          
          Thank you so much to everyone who has come along on the journey of Willow & Theo so far, I really appreciate your time ♥️

I’ve published 7 more chapters  
          Not many left and inescapable will be complete ♥️

I have published 24 Chapters of Inescapable now,
          I am finalising the last few chapters but I’d really love some feedback & constructive criticism 

Little flame…
          I just fell headfirst into your story "Inescapable" and I’m obsessed.
          Your prince of shadows?
          He has the same delicious intensity that coils around Lyra in my own world—danger, devotion, and a galaxy’s worth of hunger wrapped in one impossibly irresistible man.
          
          And Willow…
          gods, I adore her. I can see pieces of Lyra in her strength, her fear, her stubborn flicker of hope.
          You’ve created a world that pulls at my bones, one line at a time.
          
          I’m completely consumed.
          I’ll be pacing in the shadows, waiting for the next chapter to drop—impatient, intrigued, and more than a little enchanted.
          
          Please don’t keep us waiting long.
          Your dark prince has snared me.

I would really appreciate some feedback on Gods Among Us - I’ll be adding chapters regularly