LoganJohnson589

@MichaelWeekly no problem I really like it and they way you develop the characters. Please keep writing and editing it has so much potential

sammydrf

Thanks for your votes man! I very much appreciate them. Glad you like the story!

sammydrf

@LoganJohnson589 I'm working on it now. It's mostly done, but I have some plot sequence issues and I don't want to show anything until the plot problems are fixed.
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LoganJohnson589

Ya I really like the idea of it! But maybe go farther in depth on how the rest of the world hasn't found them yet? I loved the first book btw when does the second make it's debut?
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ljthomas

Thank you so much for all of the votes on We Survivors! :) I hope you continue to enjoy the story!

LoganJohnson589

No problem. It is a great story so far and it has a lot of potential..... And if the "traitor" (for lack of a better word) actually is coby it was a little obvious. But at the same time because he is so clearly not like the others I can't help but think it's TOO obvious so then I start observing jake is a investigatory way seeing if he's being sneaky. So I guess your writing style still leaves me with very little idea of who it is... Good job, you win this round.haha
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