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is this right please repair this if it is wrong
          
          When my father died from the war. He keep all the sword to save his family . His name is Adalard his father left a letter , It says “My son. I have a favor for you . You can find the elements of Swords”,. That’s why Adalard brought his friend also his sister name Imara.

Loner_guy

@imaginaryrobot777  When my father died at the war, he kept all the swords on his family. His name is Adalard. His father left a letter and it says, "My son, I have a favor to you. Find the elements of the swords." That is why Adalard brought his friend and also his sister, Imara.
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Loner_guy

Yo guys, please read the story REVERSED on my reading list "NEED TO READ FOR IMPROVEMENT" please comment down on chapters that are good and bad and if it is still need some improvement. Just don't do harsh comments. If you did, it is karma who will take care of you. Enjoy reading guys! Thanks a lot!