Okay, third part, it's called 'No good deed' and it introduces a new character! I know it's pretty frustrating to digress from Melo as I'm sure he's grown on you, haha. But she's integral to the story. *spoiler alert, it's a she*
Thanks for the follow Sisyphean! I absolutely love your bio and completely agree. The power of creating something on paper is an amazing feeling, but sharing it with others is very scary until you get feedback. But its the readers comments that help to push you forward and write more.