Your words are beautiful. Everything is perfect.
Yes, i know and i believe every writer has their own way of writing and each way is unique and beautiful.
But I think, you should increase the length of your chapters. That will make the readers read more and take more interest in it.
And the best thing i loved about your writings is that you imagine freely, put as many aspects as you want. Your words have the magic which reveals your mystical mind.
You are such a great writer.
I would just like to say one more thing. Never ever let anyone limit your writings. Let your imaginations flow and let your world take the magic. That's what makes your stories unque.
