louisdebora
Your writing immediately pulls the reader into that uneasy mix of fear, wonder, and denial. The Polaroid obsession, the sleepless night, the ordinary school morning turning surreal—it all builds tension perfectly. And the moment Jace walks in, younger, confused, but with that flicker of recognition—chef’s kiss. It feels like a story balancing between mystery, destiny, and emotional chaos, and you deliver that shift with perfect timing.